Reviews for The Never-ending Road |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So what he really means in that statement about Gold Class, is that he would do it for her. It's about time he stopped being an ass about Remix and actually helped him despite his hatred. It only goes to show his love for Harriet is stronger then his loathing of Remus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck me sideways, would you look at that! She summoned a fucking broom! Severus couldn't have looked away if the dark lord was regenerating on the carpet behind him. That mental picture made me laugh so HARD! Thank you for that! Great chapter! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if Snape ever watched The Princess Bride? It seems the password is please. Already wrapping him around her little finger. He just hasn't fully realized it yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love how you write Dumbledore. How he is deeply amused by Lockheart's ridiculousness. When you think of it like that, it makes ridiculous people way more interesting. I can't help but think of Dinner for Shmucks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This was one of my favorite HP stories yet! I really loved the characters, the wit, and the creativity that went into writing this very long fic. Thank you for making life just a bit better for me this past month. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was half expecting Harriet to find that capsule in her pocket and throw it at Voldermort. Maybe turn him into a monkey or a squirrel or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if Harriet's dream was Sirius dying. Except that doesn't explain the golden dust. Unless he dies in the time room...and maybe the time turner sand is gold? |
![]() ![]() Remember, in your version of this story, no one stole Harriet's wand. She left it in the tent, and retrieved it later. Yet you mention someone stealing Miss Potter's wand in this chapter. |
![]() ![]() The homonum revealio wouldn't have worked either, since wearing the cloak could hide you from Death himself, according to legend. Also, there would have been no shimmering since that comes from a disillusion spell. The cloak was special because it could truly hide anyone. Only sound could give you away. Nothing a silencing charm couldn't fix of course. But maybe she didn't think of that and her harsh breathing gave her away... |
![]() ![]() As you wish...I'm thinking Princess Bride reference. |
![]() ![]() So true. Albus is right. Children do learn more from unfair teachers. I never thought of it that way. Very insightful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you haven't updated in a while but if uou have any chapters in reserve I'd love to read them. |
![]() ![]() Malfoy being the dog had me in stitches laughing. |
![]() ![]() You've made the girls in your story so absolutely loveable and brave. I love reading about them and I'm surprised I'm enjoying Harriet so much when I would have previously said Harry was the most adorable and good kid that ever existed. |