|Reviews for Complicated|
| MsLiss chapter 15 . 12/23/2022
That’s a grant realisation for Bella to have
| MsLiss chapter 12 . 12/23/2022
| wronglydreamer chapter 20 . 9/25/2021
Hiya! Sooo I got hooked on another of your stories! I enjoyed how the story developed and how Emma got everything she deserved (love and a loving family), it was strange the conceiving but apart from yhat I totally enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing!
| StrawberryFreesia chapter 12 . 11/4/2019
Definitely right... Keep babies away from Aro. We all know how that went down with the immortal children.
| cullengirl08 chapter 20 . 10/31/2019
This was a great story, from start to finish! I loved how Edward and Bella had their little family and nurtured it through the years as it grew!
| StarryEyedWriter8 chapter 20 . 7/17/2019
I loved this story! Thank you for sharing.
| Bevey99 chapter 20 . 5/26/2019
This was so good. Read it today. So sweet. As always thanks for writing and sharing.
| Sidni101 chapter 20 . 2/20/2019
This is an awesome story. Thanks for a job well done.
| Hetwaszoietsals chapter 20 . 12/20/2018
I can’t understanding why I never came across this amazing story before but I’m so glad I found it! What a roller coaster of emotions! Thank you so much for writing this!
| dreamthief19 chapter 20 . 12/17/2018
Yet another good story by you! Thanks for sharing!
| Virginia May chapter 20 . 10/7/2018
Another of your lovely stories finished! This one was such a long time ago, sheesh. I was living a very different life then, going through a hideous estrangement from a partner who refused to separate from me. Busy sheltering my kids from that and trying to get my career together. I had put a moratorium on anything fic, so I realize now how I forgot about this story and your penname fell out of my memory. I just had my own very "Complicated" life at the time.
Anyway, this isn't about me, lol, I just wanted to share with you that had I read this at the time it was published, I would have wished you well on your RL author adventures. It was a sensitive topic at the time but I was lucky enough to work with many authors that navigated that change without pulling all their fics in the process. I'm so glad you're one of those, as it's such a blessing to the readers. And I'm also glad that, since you've written this, you've found regular employment, published several books, and... gift of all gifts to the fandom, found a way to also continue sharing your fanfiction stories with us. How very fortunate we are to have you! You are a great talent, and I hope you find many, many ways to use that talent in ways that fulfill you.
Cheers and Best Wishes for the Safe and Happy Birth of your Baby Girl!
| Virginia May chapter 13 . 10/7/2018
I finished this story early this morning, and I came back to this chapter to review because it hit a chord with me, in that it showcases Felix verbally harassing and physically grabbing Bella in school. I went through some of this growing up. Not because I was sexually active, but because I wasn't. And the thing that occurred to me while reading this, is what are our school districts doing to help young people deal with and stand up to sexual harassment at school? I'm sure in theory, all students are supposed to feel safe in school from any kind of bullying or harassment, and are to report anything that doesn't make them feel safe, but are our children getting the same kind of instruction about sexual harassment the same way we are trained in the workplace? Are we teaching them about the power of language and that even jokes of an unwelcome nature can be grounds for discipline? Are we teaching them about "hostile environments"? It's ridiculous, especially given how many of us are saying #metoo to all manner of sexual harassment and assault, to assume we can wait until boys are adults to teach them that even their language can constitute &/or create aggression. Even more ridiculous is the idea that we wait until they're adults to start holding them accountable for crossing those lines! I have a son in middle school, and I think it's time for a little HR session at home. No way I am leaving it up to someone else, or until he's 18 to teach him these things.
F***ing A! #metoo
| Virginia May chapter 1 . 10/6/2018
Ah, I remember this one. GinnyW and I were working together in RL when you posted this and, intrigued, I put it on alert. I still recall reading this first chapter and thinking, "WTF!?"
Three kids and this made me squeamish, lol. Finally around to reading the complete story.
Thanks as always for sharing your talents!
| bobbysgirl1976 chapter 12 . 5/14/2018
This has been an interesting read... one that has me remembering almost all of what Bella is going through. ALMOST! I was a single teen mom ( 14 to be exact )and I had no problems connecting with my baby or dealing with taking care of a newborn. My mother was not as supportive so as my sons voice and advocate I have yet to speak to her and my son is 42 years old. She to tried to put my son up for adoption but because I had the balls to stand up to her I kept my baby. Edward was wrong but... that's just me being the mama bear.
| Liz 1974 chapter 7 . 3/28/2018
Skin a deer , make thin rope with it wet the deer hide ties James limbs in between two trees let it dry & it will pull James limbs painfully until they tear off JS