I just foind this story and read it all! I really hope you pick this back up. It is soooooooo frikken good! Im in love! I really want to read more!

I found this story 10 years ago when I was still a teen, and I still come back to it every once in a while hoping for an update. The world you built and the characters that inhabit it are very interesting and compelling. Hope you are doing well!

that's just, unfari

I love the who is harry potter, I love his sass with everyone lol

pfhahahahaha hermione can't draw

Here to celebrate the 10 year anniversary of your last update! This is still one of my favorite fics even after all these years-every now again it just pops into my head and I just have to read it again. For me this is the replacement TLOK since I didn’t enjoy that show past the first season. I don’t want to pressure you if you’ve decided to give up this story but I hope you know that, should you ever decide to continue, there are some of us who will stick with this story even if it takes another 10 years to finish. But if you really have moved on, I wish you the best. Also, please disregard the unkind comments about how you’ve portrayed the characters and the pacing of the story. I personally think your characterization of Harry and others is brilliant and love the amount of detail you’ve packed into your world building. This is your story and you should write it the way you want. People who don’t like it should just read wow thing else. Anyways, hope you are well and happy 2024!

If you're going to use threatening his family as a plot device, probably should have set up him giving a shit about his family. Like I don't see why this Harry cares about his parents *jobs* lol like they're all benders, they'll be fine even not in government

Aww, that’s such a cool way for it to go! If only there were more chapters! Thank you for making and sharing this great story!
Now theories: did Harry kill Charlie accidentally by knocking him on the head? … I’m joking, that only happens in real life. Obviously, it was Barty. Probably been in the same year as Charlie and they have an old grudge?
Still no Luna!

1. Ahh, that explains why I couldn’t really make this fanfic and LoK merge in my head - you wrote it before the second season came out? That’s dedication!
2. No Luna :(
3. The only monsters in the stadium were human. What assholes.

1. Your Ron is brilliant. I wanted to write that a few chapters ago, but this chapter brought it back to the forefront of my mind. JKR should have written him like that, then the fandom would have an actual reason to hate him!
2. I think Crouch and Ron are very much alike in the murdering aspect of their personality. Maybe Crouch would also grovel as much as Ron did here, after all he served Voldemort.
3. Harry could just burn down the whole stadium, that be a nice “fuck the rules”. Of course, they mustn’t catch him.

Aww, I’d rather have him continue to not cooperate! I guess I have read too much malicious compliance fan fiction

Please resolve some of these mysteries! Was his experience in the chamber the reason for his dreams and inner turmoil? Or did somebody take his memories about a traumatic childhood experience? What about the woman with the black braid? And the drowned boy in the pond?

Is Harry’s problem that Luna solved done? Or will it become worse, like she said?

I really rather read some mystery resolving than moving the year plot forward. Still, nice chapter. Even though I don’t like this newly confident Harry as much as the one before.

That was an awesome duel (and an awesome chapter)!
Also, your Harry is such a Harry. Just like in the books. I hate his character. But I guess it’s a nice departure from the usual fanfiction where Harry is a totally different person.

1. Your pacing is totally fine: things are happening each chapter, and it is clear these things are serving a narrative purpose.
2. I thought this would be a spirit encounter. But it was Luna! On the other hand, what’s the difference?

Last chapter I thought it was a bad idea to remove house elves, leaves to little behind of the original Hogwarts. But know I think JKR should have made the house elves muggles. This is genius!
Thank you for writing, I’m looking forward to reading the rest of your story.