Reviews for What If I Was Wrong?
hjohn302 chapter 8 . 9/10/2016
Wow! You did an amazing job with this story. You say you can't write angst but you did inredible with this!

I can't even... I decided to go and read some of your earliest stories as I waited for a new chapter in "Reconstruction" and then popped into one of you 5-0 stories... I think I may have to watch the series as its on Netflix right now! :-) Ugh! Not a new fandom! :-)

Wonderful stories, all of them... but this one really dragged me in!
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 8 . 6/17/2016
Good thing for Danny being able to recognize Steve's scent. Love that he wanted to sniff Steve to get his scent. And have him say a rhyme.
Cubit2 chapter 8 . 2/20/2016
Can't sign in from here but wanted to review. What a terrible position for Danny. Horrifying. Loved that he knew Steve's scent and even thought about what people would think of that. AWonderful story idea and very well done.
detectivejiju chapter 8 . 11/5/2015
Yet another fantastic fanfiction. The whole theme of the story was too good. The part when each team mates prove they are real to danny was tlawesome... Enjoyed it.
beetledriver7 chapter 8 . 6/2/2015
Such a great story! Lots of excellent whump, action, and ohana. :)
Phoebe Miller chapter 8 . 8/26/2014
Fantastic story. :-)
Knyle Borealis chapter 8 . 8/15/2014
Heh. The bad Steve was from Australia. ;)
Which of course makes sense, because EVERYone knows that Australia is home to the descendants of the criminals that Europe (UK) couldn't handle and thus shipped overseas. I got a full rant on that stereotype after offending an Aussie by asking if he was British because of his accent. Evidently the fact that I was eight years old did not diminish my offense.
...It was actually really funny, after-the-fact. And I liked listening to the guy talk.
thewarpedmind1 chapter 8 . 7/21/2014
OMG! That was fantastic! :)
JMCP chapter 8 . 7/30/2013
Who was the fake "Steve"? Will they try to fool Danny again? Please keep this going!
ManoaFalls chapter 8 . 5/23/2013
Great friendship story. The angst wasn't over the top. Very believable. Good story arc. Some good awkwardness wrapped in humor. Thanks.
magikmarker chapter 8 . 4/18/2013
Rainey chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
This was a terrific story! It had me gripped from beginning to end. It was emotional, exciting and very well-written. I really enjoyed reading it.
mckono4ever chapter 8 . 12/10/2012
Sorry I haven't gotten around to reading the end until now. Didn't have Internet for almost a week and haven't exactly caught up on everything. Plus I just started a new story. Anyway, enough excuses. It was a perfect ending. Sweet and loving and happy. Enough to know that Danny is going to be fine and he'll get right again. It was perfect. I loved it.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/6/2012
Loving this story thanks.
Kelana66 chapter 8 . 12/8/2012
I loved Danny knowing the scent if his best friend :)
He is really a great Detective ! I knew it!
Thank you for sharing - i just loved it.
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