|Reviews for What If I Was Wrong?|
| hjohn302 chapter 8 . 9/10/2016
Wow! You did an amazing job with this story. You say you can't write angst but you did inredible with this!
I can't even... I decided to go and read some of your earliest stories as I waited for a new chapter in "Reconstruction" and then popped into one of you 5-0 stories... I think I may have to watch the series as its on Netflix right now! :-) Ugh! Not a new fandom! :-)
Wonderful stories, all of them... but this one really dragged me in!
| Long Live BRUCAS chapter 8 . 6/17/2016
Good thing for Danny being able to recognize Steve's scent. Love that he wanted to sniff Steve to get his scent. And have him say a rhyme.
| Cubit2 chapter 8 . 2/20/2016
Can't sign in from here but wanted to review. What a terrible position for Danny. Horrifying. Loved that he knew Steve's scent and even thought about what people would think of that. AWonderful story idea and very well done.
| detectivejiju chapter 8 . 11/5/2015
Yet another fantastic fanfiction. The whole theme of the story was too good. The part when each team mates prove they are real to danny was tlawesome... Enjoyed it.
| beetledriver7 chapter 8 . 6/2/2015
Such a great story! Lots of excellent whump, action, and ohana. :)
| Phoebe Miller chapter 8 . 8/26/2014
Fantastic story. :-)
| Knyle Borealis chapter 8 . 8/15/2014
Heh. The bad Steve was from Australia. ;)
Which of course makes sense, because EVERYone knows that Australia is home to the descendants of the criminals that Europe (UK) couldn't handle and thus shipped overseas. I got a full rant on that stereotype after offending an Aussie by asking if he was British because of his accent. Evidently the fact that I was eight years old did not diminish my offense.
...It was actually really funny, after-the-fact. And I liked listening to the guy talk.
| thewarpedmind1 chapter 8 . 7/21/2014
OMG! That was fantastic! :)
| JMCP chapter 8 . 7/30/2013
Who was the fake "Steve"? Will they try to fool Danny again? Please keep this going!
| ManoaFalls chapter 8 . 5/23/2013
Great friendship story. The angst wasn't over the top. Very believable. Good story arc. Some good awkwardness wrapped in humor. Thanks.
| magikmarker chapter 8 . 4/18/2013
| Rainey chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
This was a terrific story! It had me gripped from beginning to end. It was emotional, exciting and very well-written. I really enjoyed reading it.
| mckono4ever chapter 8 . 12/10/2012
Sorry I haven't gotten around to reading the end until now. Didn't have Internet for almost a week and haven't exactly caught up on everything. Plus I just started a new story. Anyway, enough excuses. It was a perfect ending. Sweet and loving and happy. Enough to know that Danny is going to be fine and he'll get right again. It was perfect. I loved it.
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/6/2012
Loving this story thanks.
| Kelana66 chapter 8 . 12/8/2012
I loved Danny knowing the scent if his best friend :)
He is really a great Detective ! I knew it!
Thank you for sharing - i just loved it.