|Reviews for Deviled Eggs and Ham|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/13
All of his brothers are horrible (except Rin he's a precious cinnamon bun, most of the bad things he does are accidents)
| DevotedDreamer chapter 1 . 7/18
Very fun read! It's funny how Rin can be an expert fighter but so clumsy at times! xD Keep up the good work! :)
| OverObsessedFangirl8804 chapter 1 . 5/15
You bet Shiro is. Welp.
| paracuties chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
Poor Mephisto LOLOL! I laughed at this :D
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
*bursts out laughing* A little taste of his own medicine, from the really scary Okumura twin.
| ShimmeringCrimson chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
That was beautiful. :'D
| born on the day of earthquakes chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Go Yukio! Let a human bully a demon! Ha!
Really funny. Short but good writing style.
And did I mention that it's really funny? :)))
| Yuu3 chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Forget Shiro, a now dead man, I'm the one laughing hysterically here. And that would still be a understatement. I swear, vow, whatever there is, I shall never come close to your stories ever again. I'm dying of laughter here! DYING! Your stories shall be the end of me. Definitely.
| Meep chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
I would definitely say Shiro is laughing to death (again) over poor Mephisto. Ah well... Family is family. Until he kills them. I'm sure he will someday. 'Till then, he's rather stuck with them. Poor Mephisto.
| roo17 chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Poor Mephisto! And poor dolls! XD
| MissJ chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Naaw, Mephisto XD
| SuperiorDimwit chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Oh, good one... good one... I won't get this grin off my face for a few days, that's for sure. Hell yes, Mephisto's beloved dolls... "big eyes, it might need exorcising..." x'D Oh, Rin, you lovely good-intentioned clumsy teenage boy...! Just how desperate Mephisto has to be, to double Yukio's salary... ohohohoho I feel so sorry for him, seeing his beloved collection butchered before his eyes... but not sorry enough to keep from laughing my ass off...
And then Yukio blasts the last doll to pieces: oh love... xD Yes, Shiro is rolling around on some cloud up in heaven and laughs hysterically.
You've rebooted this one, I think...? I do recall seeing it before, though not in this version... Very good work: short, spot-on, hilarious!
| bluecapen chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Lol. Its really funny. And neat Rin and Yukio working together to destroy the moe dolls. Haha
| ariedling chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
i love it, but to be fair mephesto wasn't thinking. i mean he works in a school
| Dark Inu Fan chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
I don't know about Shirou, but I'm Laughing my A$$ off! No wonder the man had so many things locked up in that church! As for Yukio... Rin may have inherited the looks and flames, but Yukio inherited the personality. Rin... is just... clumsy. Keep up the good work, dark (Something I'd like to see though, is Rin finally getting fed up with Mephisto's fondness of ramen and trying to force the older demon to eat some real food)