Reviews for The Mission
Ayina11 chapter 12 . 11/15/2016
ok, I this chapter seems weird, too bad because the beginning of the story is great. But I'll continue to read it until the end
Reinbeau chapter 25 . 6/23/2016
Thank you so much for sharing your creativity!
jk chapter 23 . 2/21/2016
thank god that shits over with. Sue using Charlie...her new love interest to get over the old one was getting seriously fucking annoying...I want to smack the fuck out of sue...hate that bitch
jk chapter 21 . 2/21/2016
I don't get it...after he said it wouldn't happen again..why in the fuck would bella agree to another date? and she'll always forgive him? even though he has backtracked their relationship, makes all the calls, hold all the power...well bella lets him have all the power...shes soooo pathetic!
jk chapter 20 . 2/21/2016
so your main plot line is now you've backtracked Edwards relationship with bella so you still have a story to tell?stupid
jk chapter 18 . 2/21/2016
are you trying to say that james walked off with Tanya and Tanya had sex with james? james has a MATE, why would he want anything to do with a nasty old whore like Tanya? Does MATE not mean much in your story?
jk chapter 17 . 2/21/2016
I still don't get why their all listening to her. Shes like your with so and so and bella your with me...and they just fall in line? Why? I don't understand.
jk chapter 16 . 2/21/2016
this whole thing feels pointless. There are already waaaay more people then needed to take out vickis punk ass so I don't get why their all following her and getting more people just seems so pointless. and why in the fuck is she builing a "army" that isn't loyal to her? how does that help? Now their going to talk to ben...why follow her ALL that way? why not just rip her head off?
and that whole Charlie about bella just says..listen you ass I'm right your wrong, your either with me or against me...he'd be like you know I'm on your side bells...its you and me...or solved
jk chapter 12 . 2/21/2016
bella just continues to be the stupid little fucktard you wrote her to be...why wouldn't she explain everything rght there at the cullens? why play right into vickis hands...bella knew Charlie doesn't know that vicki and them are liars...yet she goes with him to them...she leaves the cullens in a huge hurry cause apparently they had a important appointment to get to...LOL
your sacrificing Bella for the sake of your story...which makes no god damn sense because shes YOUR MAIN CHARACTER
jk chapter 11 . 2/21/2016
what the hell was that? Bella is just waiting around with bated breath...waiting for Edward to make a move...ready and a pathetic little whore. I don't get why bella gave him all the power. why does the relationship only move forward on his say so? I don't get it! I freaking hate your bella, shes soooooo weak!
jk chapter 10 . 2/21/2016
omg...fangirl squeal...he like... omg he wrote me a song...seriously who gives a fuck? some dude that doesn't even LIKE you wrote you a the fuck what?
jk chapter 9 . 2/21/2016
I still don't fucking understand why shes so god damn desparate! shes having him freakin tutor her...shes lying about reading romeo and Juliet just so they can study it together...shes holding his hand ... I don't get why you would do anything like that with someone that has already said THERE WILL BE NOTHING BETWEEN US!

I hate bella at this point...HATE HER...for having no self respect...for coming off as pathetic and weak...clingy...DESPARATE...

E's like "i don't want you"
b's like "omg omg omg he talked to me, I hope this is the start of something PRECIOUS"

stupid fucking new born whore
jk chapter 8 . 2/21/2016
salut beaut means beautiful OR sexy? either? well that's got to be confusing...cause a baby can be beautiful...but you wouldn't want to mean the other thing...that's just fucked up

I don't get why you have bella being so goddamn PATHETIC! He keeps rejecting her she should just stay the fuck away from him now! and the meddling family is getting fucking old QUICK. THey need to but the fuck out and bella needs to stay away from the spoiled manchild...he already said he doesn't want you ass bella get the fuck over it and move on! you've got her looking all desparate and clingy...I know you don't want me but I'm gonna follow you around...then ask you to tutor me...really? stupid hoe bag
jk chapter 7 . 2/21/2016
I'm confused...why she is going anywhere with him? he just said they would never have anything more then a baby sitter/ whatever relationship...and she likes him so that's a huge downer...but shes still gonna follow him? fuck that! he said they would NEVER have a there it is. why fucking bother with his ass then?
jk chapter 6 . 2/21/2016
I'm confused about something bella said. She said that she remembers being good in the kitchen...but not why. What the fuck does that mean? I don't remember why I can cook. What kind of statement is that? You can probably cook for the same reason everyone that can, can. Cause you have to eat so you try to cook food and you want it to taste good so you try hard. LOL

it was so obvious that you are eluding to renee being no good in the kitchen. AND? lots of people cant cook. It doesn't make bella, better or more grown up...a lot of fics elude to that. That because she can and does cook its like were supposed to see a more mature being...ehhhh not so much. I could cook when I was like 11 soooooo bella being ok in the kitchen means jake that comment just sounded fucking weird
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