Reviews for Memories
Estoma chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
This is a very interesting piece, Johanna. I don't think I've read anything about the Capitol children before, in so much detail. You pick three interesting characters to follow, showing a range of attitudes, and it's really heartbreaking.

Using a similar set up for the first and last paragraphs gives it a good, strong ending and it certainly works for me.

[The Capital] 'The Capitol'

[under what seems like a blanket of people] I love this description.

[nurses then enter the seen] 'scene', not 'seen'.

stand in your light chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
This was very well written Johanna

It was artistic and eloquent, and I quite enjoyed the repeated adjectives, as well as the switching 'POV's' of a sort.

It was a mature, intelligently written read, so thank you!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
*sniff* *sniff* *loud crying* how sad!:'(
bs13 chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Wow...this was deep. And sad. Amazing, though.