Reviews for Legacy
PrinceKeldar chapter 29 . 11/27
Wow I thought this story was dead. I love this and thank you so much for coming back to it. It is a fantastic story.
Li1991 chapter 28 . 11/25
Oh my gosh! I do not believe you updated! When I received the notification I was very happy. Please, update as soon as possible.
Guest chapter 28 . 11/23
So glad your back! Yours is my favorite mass effect fanfiction! Can't wait for more!
reviewer7456 chapter 28 . 11/21
I never thought this would be continued! This is one of the first stories I read when I started getting into fanfiction and it's always been one of my favorites.

As for this newest chapter, I think that the dream at the beginning is a good way of showing the confused state Shepard's brain must be in, foreign and familiar memories mixing and merging together as his mind tries to make sense of what it is seeing.
Ygrain33 chapter 28 . 11/19
You're BACK! I cannot believe that my favourite story has been resurrected! /a celebration dance/ I have to re-read it all to catch up on the details, but it's so good to have Shepard back!
Guest chapter 27 . 3/16
Shep/Liara for life. Unfortunate that this was abandoned (yeah, 3 years ago... Leave it to me to read recent fics). I really like the way you write, and there aren't enough BroShep/Liara fics out there
farrisr24 chapter 3 . 3/4/2015
Love this story! If I can give you a thought, I assume your Shepard is a soldier class, if it were me I would incorporate his adrenaline rush ability manifesting itself somehow, maybe even throwing it in when he has his first fight as a kid... just a thought! Great story!
Li1991 chapter 27 . 2/18/2015
I found his story to a few days and I can only say that it is amazing. please continue
K.M.S chapter 2 . 1/15/2015
wow. the realization that Henry is going to die. Powerful.

the placement of Shep's fighting is a little odd. We know this is the chapter. this is where it goes down... might have been better in a next chapter. Something along the lines of "I miss the wood shop. i miss henry." blah blah blah "my only marketable skill is fighting. Fighting like my brother taught me- like my mother taught me. fight with everything you got. the Aliance fights..."

great chapter. moving at begining, middle and end. Love that he doesnt make any kills. hes still just a kid.
K.M.S chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
very, very well writen. some 'interesing' word choices and sometimes Shep sounds like he is making a small thing the biggest thing in the world in the word choice and diction but negativity aside, i almost cried at the end there.
AlsoKnownAsMatt chapter 27 . 11/22/2014
Really nice job on building the relationship with Liara in this chapter. I assume your day-job which is clearly much more than that is keeping you busy. I do hope that at some point you will be able to return to this story. Thanks loads for your hard work on it.
AlsoKnownAsMatt chapter 22 . 11/22/2014
This chapter is a little too special-forcesish aka a team of only two, only an apc etc. As always action is good and emotional responses are comprehensible but whereas Bioware's three team member limit seems silly, this feels unrealistic given the game's imposed boundaries and the future threat of having to deal with Benezia, not to mention whatever caused the code omega which of course we know is rachni.
AlsoKnownAsMatt chapter 16 . 11/22/2014
Catching up still, the Therum scene as you have it is well written where action and emotion are concerned but the biology just won't work. No water based organism could survive 217 degree heat for three days. Three minutes (even on a planet with higher specific gravity and atmospheric pressure) would be impossible. If no higher specific gravity the blood would boil and with higher specific gravity and atmospheric pressure many of the body's functions would not continue. This is partly Bioware's problem in framing but can be partly explained away by Prothian environmental controls. The way you have set this up Liara would have been dead long before either the Geth or shepard could have gotten to her. Other than this you continue to do a very solid job with this.
AlsoKnownAsMatt chapter 10 . 11/21/2014
I'm catching up this fic. I don't know how a paragon shep would have handled this particular situation though I think the larger problem is that in the ME universe Torfan for the simple reason that the victory there, due to its strategic value in the military and propoaganda sense (IE the butcher literally shocked the galaxy so badly that Votarians were less willing to go into slaving, much as the US action in Libya early in the nineteenth century knocked down piracy world wide for nearly two centuries). Admittedly Torfan is even more violent than the action against the pirates of Libya but there are solid historic and strategic parallels. Therefore, arguably, a paragon shep could not have brought about the non-military parts of the strategic victory at Torfan. Thanks for your hard work on this, I will look forward to catching the rest of this up and hope that you are able to begin writing again at some point along the way.
Guest chapter 17 . 10/1/2014
Another fabulous chapter! Really looking forward to reading more of this amazing story :D
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