|Reviews for The Love That Binds Us|
| Luna Lumen chapter 37 . 3/9
You made me cry how could you
| Luna Lumen chapter 8 . 3/7
You're seriously breaking my heart right now. Thanks for that. Also, I'm so happy you didn't make it seem like there was only a good side and an evil side. I think this may be what love feels like
| Luna Lumen chapter 7 . 3/7
I knew it! Just when things were good you just had to make be doubt him again! But I love it anyway. Damn it
| Luna Lumen chapter 5 . 3/7
I'm so nervous right now, I don't know if I can read on, but I have to know what happens next. This is only chapter five and they're together and happy, but there are still fifty chapters to go, oh god...
| Vas Happenin 1D13 chapter 54 . 2/16
Best. Story. EVER! .
| Kangarooney chapter 53 . 2/9
What what? A sequel? This is already over 220,000 words, I'm eager to see what else you have planned for this. :L
| Kangarooney chapter 48 . 2/9
Annnnnnd AGAIN with a disruption in their relationship? REALLY? Although... it had to come out eventually... and I couldn't really see Mordred hugging Merlin at some future point all like: "I love you... oh and right after I left Camelot I inteded to kill your mom. No worries though, nothing came of it."
| Kangarooney chapter 46 . 2/9
Why did Gwaine have to die? Of all the knights, he was my favorite. Why GWAINE?
| Kangarooney chapter 43 . 2/9
Uh oh. They broke Arthur. He'll probably never be able to look at them the same again. xD
| Kangarooney chapter 42 . 2/9
So one little issue keeps popping up, usually I forget about it, because it's so insignificant... but, constructive criticism is always appreciated (at least on my part) and it's not like this is a major problem or anything... wow I'm making a big deal about this.
Anyway, you're using "all right" instead of the actual word "alright". The only time you could use "all right" would be to seperate them by other words. Like... When Arthur asks Mordred if Merlin is "all right" you could rephrase it as "Is all well and right with him?" ...actually. 's kinda sucky. Maybe just change all those little errors to "alright"?
I'm being very repetitive right now... *headdesk*
*sigh* ...if only you'd had Merlin do something like try and use his magic up (even though he's magic incarnate, maybe he's too 'crazy' to remember?) and wreak havoc upon the forest surrounding him? A mentally unstable Emrys is a terrible danger. *rubs hands together* *begins to plot*
Yeah no. This is your story, and I'm sad that I've only got 12 more gargantuan chapters left. Reading a book is always a fantastic experience, one that is well written even more so. But after everything's resolved? It's saddening, placing it down knowing - KNOWING - you won't be able to experience that beautiful feeling you get from reading it for the FIRST time.
Anyway... How long was Merlin wandering? You said a couple days... but in his condition I don't think he'd spend much time - if any - finding food or water. Now understandably, he's a creature of magic, so maybe...?
The Mordred/Arthur bonding moment was completely necessary. :P
| Kangarooney chapter 41 . 2/9
It's just that... when they return, Meerlin won't be there. Everyone will be celebrating the fact that Arthur is in fact NOT dead, yet Merlin will be wandering... lost.
| Kangarooney chapter 35 . 2/9
Just so you know, you are doing a BRILLIANT job with this. I'm sighing and crying and laughing in all of the appropriate moments; I'm following each change of scene, each change of feeling... it's like a rollercoaster - which is, honestly, an overused metaphor.
For a moment there... I REALLY believed that Merls and Mordy (it's really hard to make up nicknames for them...) had something going there. Yet it all came down to their initial problems: Merlin's too suspicious and Mordred had consorted w/Morgana in the past. Oh... and my hatred for Kara has only intensified. I never liked her in the series, she took too much screen time. And took away from what could have been perfectly good Merdred-iness.
Anywho, Imma just go and keep reading. Just wanted to know that you have me sufficiently wrapped around mu finger - so much that I can't even skip ahead (well I CAN) for fear of missing out.
| Kangarooney chapter 25 . 2/9
That last bit totally helped. You had me chuckling... I didn't know what chuckling sounds like and I was doing it. Merlin is a BOSS.
| Kangarooney chapter 11 . 2/8
Okay. So I'm gonna take a break from this horribly depressing, factual story, and go read either some Merlin!Whump or BAMF!Merlin. Because this DREAD is tearing me apart. Physical pain is so much easier to deal with.
| ProcrastinationIsMyCrime chapter 33 . 2/1