|Reviews for Say Please|
| ValykirieRevolution chapter 1 . 3/31
Nice to see/read another Christian Grey gets pwn'd fic. Loved this one. :)
| Celestia's Paladin chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
Like most of your commenter I have never read... that book... for three reaons:
1) I am very much outside the target demographic by being male
2) Trashy romance novels aren't my thing
3) Gray as a man pisses me off to no end, a man does not hurt the ones he loves to do so makes you no man
So I enjoyed Harry kicking much needed ass and offing the SOB.
| spygirly chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
not bad! you did a better job than most at following Butcher's style and staying fairly true to the canon. It was nice to see someone fry fifty shades...almost literally. Overall, a clever crossover
| psychicscubadiver chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Nicely done, though I would imagine there were easier ways to find his home than a tracking spell.
Still a very good and very cathartic story.
| Laluzi chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Hah, this was excellent. Excellent job writing Harry's PoV, and... well, 50 Shades got what it deserved.
| J the Drafter chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
This was a good story. You were patient and thorough in laying out the progression of the plot. You gave descriptions that concisely laid out the settings in important scenes without getting bogged down on irrelevant minutia. (I guess you could have described Harry's office and the hotel room he temporarily stays at, but there's probably no point, and the absence of description allows you to focus on the plot.) You also did a nice job getting into Harry's head. I don't think that Butcher himself could have done much better. I've seen the Fifty Shades books at Barnes and Noble, actually. In retrospect it's kind of a shame that I never looked at the story itself, because I feel like I'm missing out a little, though the summaries on the back of the books help. Good job on this story. I liked it.
| SevereWrath chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
This was a rare joy to read. I have't read 50 Shades of Grey (oops), so I'm sure some of it was lost on me, but still. Very nicely done.
| thomaseliot chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Oh man. This SO needed to be written. Well done you.