Reviews for It's Not About What It Is, It's About What It Can Become
Schattenspieler chapter 4 . 2/23
Wenn ich mir so das Datum an sehe glaube ich nicht das hier noch mal was passiert, was sehr schade ist weil die Geschichte bisher großartig war. Sehr süß und lustig. Mir gefällt auch dein Schreibstil gut, weil er dynamisch ist. Mann hat das Gefühl es passiert immer was. Ich mag auch beide Versionen von Once-ler
polyrhyme chapter 4 . 12/29/2013
KEEP GOING!
Lousia Rose chapter 4 . 10/23/2013
Great story.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/13/2013
THIS WAS SO CUTE!
inferno chapter 4 . 10/13/2013
Nice to know your back, simply because your awesome, and man, what would the ONCEST fandom do withoutcha?
Hot-Chocat chapter 4 . 8/19/2013
I'm sorry about your relationship. That always sucks. :(
Kasume-sama chapter 4 . 8/19/2013
I'd forgotten about this story completely! XD Anyway, I love the pancake scene! It's freaking adorable!
Just A Chess Piece chapter 3 . 6/16/2013
The Once-lers (especially Oncie) are so cute! It's a bonus having two of them! :)

I wanna help you out with the transformation. I guess the Other Once-ler should get more like the older Once-ler in the movie. Greedy, selfish, ignorant (of what he's doing to the forest), tougher, and bold. I'm not exactly sure how you can go about that, but I'm sure it'll happen gradually. :D

Nice story, I like reading it and it's only been three chapters. :)

Keep on writing,
Chess. :D
guillotineghosties chapter 3 . 3/21/2013
I absolutely love this! I love the pre-Greedler...Greedler x3
Please please continue this!
horsewhisper3 chapter 3 . 2/5/2013
OH MY GOSH IVE BEEN WAITING FOREVER FOR ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES TO BE UPDATED! Gald it was this one ;) Another great chapter I like how greed is holding a grudge agaisnt his family for they treated 'his' Oncie. lol. Are we going to recieve another great update in the near future?
Kiaraphantomhive chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
I really like the story so far and I'm just waiting for the oncest now. Hehehe.
Fallenangelqueen chapter 2 . 12/20/2012
UPDATE!
FANGIRL chapter 2 . 12/4/2012
YOUR THIS STORY IS NICE LIKE OTHER.. BUT WHEN R U GOING 2 COMPLETE URS DBZ FANFICTION...
kitchan chapter 2 . 11/3/2012
Sweet story so far. I'm looking forward to reading more. :) The interaction between the Oncelers is awesome. Nice work. ;D
whyevenask chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
"I don't know. Coolness?" xD
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