|Reviews for Orb of the Protogenoi|
| Other Guest chapter 40 . 2/17
Ignore everyone who is telling you to hurry up and update. They just really love your story and so do I. Besides I'd rather have a great chapter that took months to write than a rushed chapter that is not that great. So just take your time and write something really amazing.
| Guest chapter 23 . 2/14
hurry up and update your killing me
| Guest chapter 39 . 2/7
what happened to january huh -.-
| Guest chapter 36 . 2/5
UPDATE ALREADY OMG
| Random Person chapter 40 . 2/5
Please don't drop this story you are a really great author, and I love this story. So please update.
| Guest chapter 36 . 2/2
| Guest chapter 36 . 1/30
UPDATE HOLY SHIT I HAVE WAITED OVER A MONTH NOW
| I love you chapter 6 . 1/2
This is amazing and I really hope you won't discontinue the story please! ;-;
I love the bonus chapter and agh... There should be more mature chapters lol. Please update and thank you! This is a really good story!
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/2
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE I LOVE YOU BYE
| Caliope07 chapter 40 . 12/23/2013
Don't make me this don't make me this! ok fine! I'll wait until january!
| Guest chapter 40 . 12/22/2013
Merry Christmas to you too!
| katie.webster.1217 chapter 40 . 12/22/2013
Okay i called it that you would update BUT I DESERVE A BETTER REWARD THAN THIS!
| licorice chapter 39 . 12/18/2013
Make a chapter 12! There isn't many humor fics nowadays at this is one of the best! I laugh my butt off every time!
| Meijin-san chapter 39 . 12/6/2013
If Hermes love happy endings, then I love you. .. but not in 'that' way. :D
Anyway, thank you for the update!
I can't spotted any mistakes, so congrats!
I am loss in word, so I would just say a big AWESOME and an hearty FAST UPDATE.
Final test are coming,
| Meijin-san chapter 38 . 11/30/2013
Hello! I am reviewing from my mobile phone, so excuse the mistakes I made.
First of all, I will sum the entire story in one word, "AWESOME!"
I love your humor, it is funny and fresh. I love your writing style too, it fits the story perfectly. And of course, I love the characterization. It just.. fit them naturally. This fic is without doubt my most favorite in the entire fandom, along with your 'God of Fire'. Dude, I just want to say, your fics are awesome, amazing, fabulous, and every other praises and compliments exists.
If there's any flaws I could find, it would be typo (watch out of them, they can be a bitch sometimes), and the battle sequences is kinda.. not thrilling enough. Maybe you can give more detail? As for the other aspects, they are awesome.
Lastly, don't let my critiques let you down. They are for the good, dude. So cheer up. :D
I will wait for the upcoming chapters. And if you can, please update them as fast as Zeus finds his new mistresses and impregnates them.
Smiling in the midst of homeworks,