|Reviews for Unbreakable|
| Tempest's Rain chapter 13 . 5/11
That was fantastic! A great plot, good character development, well written- just fantastic! I see that you also like to get as much in about the knights as possible. I liked how the relationships worked in this. Am I right in assuming that you like to write Elyan, Gwaine & Lancelot the most?
| Golden Bearded Dragon chapter 1 . 4/3
This is amazing. :) I'm going to enjoy reading this, thank you!
| Guest chapter 13 . 12/2/2015
| fandombloggingaddict chapter 13 . 11/25/2015
I know it has been almost three years since you wrote this story, and it has over 300 reviews already, but I cannot help but tell you what a wonderful read it was. I soaked it up, every step of the way. For a relatively long fic, it holds the attention of the reader consistently. Your vocabulary and grammar are splendid, and the plot has an even pace that is neither boring nor too dramatic. Lastly, and by far most importantly, the characterization is spectacular. With most stories, I almost have to imagine my own fictional character to fit the parameters of the story if the actions in the fic don't fit the true character's personality. In this fic, though, Merlin and Arthur are on point, so vivid and authentic. You also wrote the knights perfectly, and Gaius' Eyebrow. Really, this is an admirable work and absolutely a memorable story. Thank you for putting so much work into it!
| Obscured Angel chapter 13 . 2/14/2015
Thank you for writing, posting and completing this story, it's appreciated.
| Whirlwind421 chapter 13 . 1/28/2015
Awesome story. I really did enjoyed it immensely. :D
| jnicweb chapter 13 . 1/23/2015
That was amazing. I love your writing style and you really captured the characters personality. I love how you described Merlin and Arthur's relationship and how they fixed their friendship. Keep writing and I really liked this story:)
| TheMerlinAddict chapter 13 . 1/4/2015
Ahhh. Brilliant! Got me on the edge of my seat for hours! You gotta have more confidence in yourself, your writing doesn't disappoint in any way! Thanks for writing! Are tyou writing any more Merlin stories at all? As far as I see this is the only one despite your obvious enthiusiasm at writing more Merlin at the end of this fic. Got Hooked on Once Upon A Time instead, huh? (See what I did there haha) Anyway, I love your style, would love to read more Merlin stries of your hand, and I just generally really loved to read this one! I have to say Enchanted Arthur was really scary! Ahhh my heart! - Which means, your writing was very convincing and amazing. :D Lots of love
| meriland25 chapter 13 . 1/4/2015
I love this story!Thecharacters are spot on, the plot is interesting without being a cliche and the writing is perfect! Have a nice day and thanks for writing :)
| Ltchoz chapter 13 . 12/28/2014
Really loved your story! Looking forward to reading your other ones.
| musicnlyrics chapter 13 . 8/21/2014
I'm really glad I found this. I like the friendship arc you had them wrung through.
Thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/10/2014
THIS IS SO GOOD I LOVE IT, YOU AMAZIJG PERSON
| DiaSphere chapter 13 . 7/22/2014
Hey there I read your FF in one go. It was funny but hurt physically at the same time, I don't really know how I should feel about this But what matters is, that I liked it, good job!
| Jounouchi123 chapter 13 . 5/24/2014
This story is amazing.. its seems original and I think they should make it an episode. I dont know how but I would love if they can, It would be my favourit episode :)
| Rowja70 chapter 11 . 4/10/2014
Your resistance to Dun Dun Duuun was not successful, I must say. Good story so far. Like the interaction between Merlin, Percival, and Arthur. Good combination of concerned and funny.