Reviews for We Found Love Part I: Garside Grange
Guest chapter 12 . 2/1/2013
Really Good but i think you should make up parts of the story instead of just copying the series.
VampiricAngel90 chapter 24 . 1/27/2013
Loved it. Really good plot.
Jabi07 chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Aw I finally found it sweetpea! it was really goodxxx
Trapped-in-a-land-of-wonder chapter 24 . 12/13/2012
Aww thanks for the shout out its a great story :)
AvidFan123 chapter 18 . 12/10/2012
great story, update soon please! :D
Trapped-in-a-land-of-wonder chapter 18 . 12/8/2012
I love this :)
baffledcarcajou1 chapter 17 . 12/6/2012
Sorry I haven't reviewed for a long time... I just, I don't know. But keep writing :)
AnonymousTeenStories chapter 14 . 11/29/2012
So good! I'm waiting for more! :D
CynicalHyaHya chapter 3 . 11/29/2012
Oooh! I think I love Bad Vlad a little too much...
I expect I would be like Becky following him around and I would totally let him bite me :3.
I love how you can tell that Vlad is screaming inside and is trying so hard to stop himself hurting Erin.
Lemonybean chapter 14 . 11/25/2012
they needed a link like this in the episode. Very well done. More please. x
Lemonybean chapter 13 . 11/21/2012
this is really sweeeet, 3
HopeCoppice chapter 13 . 11/18/2012
Very interesting, I look forward to seeing more of it!
RiverOfAntDecSwanCherik.Wilson chapter 13 . 11/17/2012
realy good chapter
Absolute Honesty chapter 13 . 11/17/2012
The grammar in this is shocking. While it did progress, the earlier chapters weren't particularly pleasant.

You have a habit for simply writing a bunch of quotations, with no plot.

"Like this?"

"Yes."

"Really?"

Etc.

Try rereading your fics before publishing them. Proofreading would make this story much more readable. All sentences need to have grammar, and particularly punctuation marks. I'd say you've missed over half of your mistakes. I can spot at least five from the last part of this chapter. That's not a good thing.

There are many things wrong with this fic, but I enjoyed the narrative. The concept was enjoyable, but overshadowed by the poor attention to grammar. I suggest you either take more time in your proofreading, or invest in a Beta.
Lemonybean chapter 12 . 11/11/2012
I'm Loving it! More please! Update soon!
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