Reviews for Unfolding
2old4fanfic chapter 182 . 3/16
Very sweet at the end, I'm imaging Edward painting three little bunnies now
2old4fanfic chapter 24 . 3/14
Colin Firth in a wet shirt, swell well to start an evening
2old4fanfic chapter 23 . 3/14
I'm enjoying the itty bitty chapters...not as short as drabbles, I hate that, but enough to give more than a taste and keep things going
S1203 chapter 182 . 1/10
So beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
S1203 chapter 151 . 1/10
Oh nooo... he is hiding smell of alcohol with pepermint... he must go on theraphy...
S1203 chapter 104 . 1/10
Ahhhh, I was waiting that another shoes drop...to good to be reality and reality is that he is weak... I am sorry for Bella...
S1203 chapter 56 . 1/10
He realy have problem. Poor Bella if he alone dont confess this. Yout writing is flawless, real joy to reading...
S1203 chapter 52 . 1/10
Advance. :)
S1203 chapter 10 . 1/10
I am hooked. What was his story?
randomjeesse chapter 182 . 1/14/2014
Oh I absolutely loved it! One of my favorite FF by far! It deserve way more reviews!
Realluv chapter 182 . 11/15/2013
This was a beautiful story... Bella is a really strong person, she dealed with a lot from Edward. Thank you for sharing! :)
Katiedid01 chapter 182 . 11/15/2013
an absolutely wonderful story. i enjoyed each and every chapter.
Guest chapter 80 . 11/6/2013
You say that Edward dated Sarah one year ago in this chapter but in chapter 48 you said that the last time he was on a real date was in the nineties.
Guest chapter 42 . 11/5/2013
You say in this Chapter that Milo is buried in Edward's backyard but in Chapter 38 you said that he was buried in Rose's backyard.
Guest chapter 31 . 11/5/2013
This is inconsistent with Ch 4 where you said that Edward was Rosalie's older brother.
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