Reviews for Melody of the Rasengan
bambam5wolf chapter 4 . 11/19/2013
awesome bro, just awesome!
keep up the great work!:)
coronadomontes chapter 4 . 10/15/2013
Interesante fanfic
EndlessChains chapter 4 . 4/2/2013
Wow. I like how the story is turning out. It is good to see that Kakashi is able to make the connections between Naruto and Minato. I hope to see the bonds between Naruto and Kakashi continue to grow as Naruto seems to look up to Kakashi a great deal. It is good to see that Kakashi is training them all equally now and it shows with the results. I cannot wait to see how Tayuya will make an appearance and how the interaction with Naruto will affect the story. It will be interesting to see. The story is very smooth and flows nicely. It was good of you to let us know that there would be a time skip with the Wave mission. That was helpful and progressed the story a little. I cannot wait to see how the story will develop now that you have gotten off of canon. The action scenes you made are really good and shows a lot of depth with how Naruto has changed from his canon version. Still the happy, knuckleheaded ninja, but he has shown growth in skills. Nicely done. Cannot wait to see more. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
Kunai94 chapter 4 . 3/22/2013
I think a team of jonin is overkill for a C-Rank mission. With the ranking system Genin do mostly D-Rank missions. Chunin do mostly C-Rank missions.
LadyMorph18 chapter 4 . 3/19/2013
I like it, and I think you were right about having Naruto talk to Iruka
polarbear257 chapter 4 . 3/19/2013
good your not dead well good chap
SSJ3 Kyuubi Gohan chapter 4 . 3/19/2013
Ouch there goes sasukes leg but shouldn't kakashi now some healing jutsus?
polarbear257 chapter 3 . 3/8/2013
have you died
ARealBloodDrinker chapter 3 . 2/8/2013
I love it! You made Naruto so cool and more like his Shippuden self I think. Course he's still a joker. I can't wait for more!
Conoga chapter 3 . 12/30/2012
Nothing better than a bro kakashi story can't to see more. It's an added plus your grammar doesn't make my eyes bleed and its a naruxtayuya
Shadowprice chapter 3 . 12/27/2012
this is good you should make more and when does tayuya show is it like in canon or different
Macilnar chapter 3 . 12/23/2012
Dear kami...Naruto with exploding clones...
foggraven chapter 3 . 12/20/2012
I really liked your version of the team introduction with kakashi's internal comments to himself, and how he basically owned up to having R18 rated hobbies, nice to see some progress with kakashi and anko, as well as him dealing with naruto's thing for sakura 'early' as you put it. Looking forward to seeing naruto use the new jutsu in the future
SSJ3 Kyuubi Gohan chapter 3 . 12/19/2012
Much better team 7.
InARealPickle chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
No way Kakashi went that long without knowing Naruto's surname. At least make your plot devices semi-realistic.
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