Reviews for Haru no Yōsei
Gijeena chapter 7 . 1/29
Very interesting! I love how fairy tail character slowly appear ;D and I am totally agree about sakura character in naruto! I mean I understand that they want naruto to look cool 'rescue sakura' and everything! But give that scene to sakura as well! She's one of the team 7 too! ;( and sakura characteristic in this story is very reasonable(or intelligent?) I love it. I wish I get to see sakura interact with natsu or lucy soon!
Konohamaya Uzumaki chapter 7 . 12/30/2014
Dang i never read a fairytail crossover that was actually good its a shame you stopped writing this it was a masterpiece
X Mika-Chan X chapter 7 . 10/28/2014
I love this story! Please update soon. )
nakamura1miu chapter 7 . 10/19/2014
WHAHAHAHAHA :D I LOVE IT !
Kurokocchi003 chapter 7 . 10/1/2014
This is awesome. I fell in love wit
Guest chapter 4 . 9/9/2014
I'm confused how old is everyone. Please explain 0-0
xXHeavengirlXx chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
This is... no offence, but this is serious shit. First of all, the meaning of writing and publishing a story is for the readers to enjoy it, and not to confuse them. Even if the author wrote the story because he/she likes it.
The first priority is the reader. So you should try to make this prologue less confusing and less annoying,

Let me tell you this. Even if you think that this prologue was 'emotional', in fact, for those who have read stories a lot, it seems like an utter annoyance. I mainly clicked on this story because the summary seemed interesting and very promising...
But as they say, the first impression is very important. Oh and I liked the title of this story very much, "Spring Fairy", a very good one indeed. And I wasn't sarcastic. That was a sincere one.

So back to the annoying prologue. First, you should chill out on the capitals because nobody likes them. You should just write it in normal letters and follow it with a description on how the character said it or something. Like 'He screamed at the top of his lungs' or something like that.
This is a story, so you describe it with words and not with visuals or something. But it is okay if you used capitals letters occasionally, but never in a full sentence.

And really, everyone HATES OOC. Try to get their character correctly. Otherwise, the 'x' button on the top right of the window feels very tempting... If you really need to change a character's personality, then you should have a story backing it up to make it seem believable.

Oh and please, please do get Sakura's personality correctly -.- I had the impression that she's a little different then the Sakura in the manga. Remember, Sakura is a kind and gentle person at heart. And a living human encyclopedia, even if that part of her didn't really get that much attention nowadays in the manga...
Almost everyone seem to forget that side of her. And Sakura isn't the one to be sarcastic and rude. That's the complete opposite of her...

Anyway, I'm not here to criticize everything you write but please do keep in mind Sakura's personality as hers is the most important one in this story (Sakura-centric...).

I will read the rest of the chapters and provide you with my opinion. Oh and if you don't want it, then say so. I don't like wasting my time trying to help people when said person I'm trying to help doesn't even appreciate it.

Good luck.
KunoichiRule20 chapter 7 . 8/31/2014
Please update again soon!
No Name chapter 7 . 8/12/2014
Loved the chapter please update soon
Guest chapter 7 . 8/4/2014
Yaaaaayyyyyy! Oh is Sakura going to find Natsume soon also? I hope so _
sakuras-horcrux chapter 2 . 8/1/2014
Ahh I can tell I am going to enjoy this
Suzululu4moe chapter 2 . 7/31/2014
Medics united!
It's a good thing for makarov that Polyuscia doesn't have inhuman strength...

Aww Erza.
guisniperman chapter 7 . 7/30/2014
I wonder when Natsu'll arrive. Sakura'll probably be the most annoyed by him, she's physically the strongest of the guild! She'll probably just flick him away like Tsunade did to Naruto.
Icetail1r chapter 7 . 7/30/2014
Hi!
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The wine...

I should have guessed, the 'mission' was an ingenious idea of how to introduce the differences in a ninja and a mage, especially like how they were so easily susceptible to genjutsu. The magic suppressant ropes are as well, but would that mean that it suppresses the spiritual side of her chakra?

Funnily enough, I kind of found Mira kind of cute in this chapter, I can image exactly how she grew up to become the silently scary demon :)

I completely understand how you needed to get back to grips with your story, anyone who left their story alone for a while needs to do that I think, or else they could end up writing in big plot holes, please take your time when you re-read and refamiliarize!

Thanks once again for the update, (insert subtle reminder) hope you keep up the regular updating
ijpowers92 chapter 7 . 7/30/2014
Well I'm really enjoying this.

I'm imagining the moment when Sakurai will finally have to choose between the guild and her chance at going home will be epic and emotional.
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