Reviews for A Show of Submission
kamonwan9952 chapter 1 . 4/3/2015
Ohgosh this first chapter was amazing! Damn the ending, kinda hot!
Hope you updates soon!
Jaely chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Absolutely worst place to leave the story! Ugh! :) I hope you will continue it :) I'm very interested in Seeing extractly how far Cara will go.
blackrider11 chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
This... is a terrible plan on Kahlan's part. And yet, somehow brilliant.
babygurlaustin1 chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
dyslexic.anagram chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Well done. There are some tense issues, but nothing serious.

I look forward to the next chapter!
Vargas1989 chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Where is the rest! Lol please more
Ms.L.May chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
... I just read this again.. Still great..
josefadama43 chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
its when stories have a great start such as this that I wait untill they are done to read because now I'm waiting
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
OMG THIS IS SO AWESOME! Okay lower case now. But this is such an incredible idea. I can't wait to see what happens next. So many possibilities. Great intor to the story and writing style. Looking forward to updates.
Smayz chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Ooh, nice introduction, even though the proposition of being her slave seemed a bit abrupt, but I suppose there's no smooth transition into that anyways. I really would like to see where this goes.
Yuri-hime chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Ouch. Poor Kahlan. Hope she knows what she's doing
FrenchGirl chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Ohoh ! Very promising start !:)
Cara is so cute and Kahlan a naughty girl ! ;)
I will be here for the next chapters !