|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Vault of Stories|
| Cold Fish Bouillabaisse chapter 1 . 3/3
No need to continue this, it's perfect as it is. Only, in my opinion, it should be the point where the Prophecy was proved false, with neither Harry nor Neville becoming the Boy-Who-Lived/Chosen One, the old gloryhound Dumbles could have his moment of fame by offing Volds without setting orphans as martyrs, but someone catches up to him to expose all of his atrocities and manipulations. Prongs and Lils should put the foundations for the major reforms of the wizarding world, which Harry and Hermione would continue after seven completely normal years at Hogwarts. They would marry, have kids and live happily ever after. The end.
| nightwing27 chapter 2 . 2/7/2015
time travel to lily and james time that is
| nightwing27 chapter 1 . 2/7/2015
good thing the story I have plan is almost like the master of time but this time it will time travel and oh yes it will finish and be a daily update two chapters a day
| DragonTamer01 chapter 2 . 2/4/2015
That's probably the best way Harry's used his mental connection to Tom against him that I've EVER read!
| DragonTamer01 chapter 1 . 2/4/2015
You may have believed that "A Different Halloween" resolved a lot of the society's issues to quickly, but to be completely blunt and honest with you, that's what I loved MOST about it!
| ToddGilliss chapter 2 . 12/3/2014
more to come?
| carick of hunter moon chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
this echo A Different Halloween by: robst but not in a bad way this is a good story start
| red neo ranger chapter 2 . 8/1/2013
Loved it keep it up can't wait to read more
| Sarek5959 chapter 2 . 7/14/2013
I'm a little confused on this one . . . The first chapter sets an excellent story up to be written but chapter two segues into assumptions that follow canon. Is this going to be addressed in following chapters
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/25/2013
Pretty cool oneshot, it would be nice to see it continued, although with Voldemort defeated they would need a new antagonist in either a corrupt ministry, a pureblood conspiracy, a senile Dumbledore, the source/general wizarding stupidity etc.
A better solution if you ever feel like writing more on this, is to simply expand it, you already have the beginning, and something close to an end, now you just need more depth to turn it into a full fledged fic. And perhaps an epilogue.
| wolfey141 chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
thqat sounds a lot like robst's story
| Tellur chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
The concept of this story sounds intriguing. 'A Different Halloween' was a good read and I would be interesting in your take. It appears to be slightly darker which is good I think.
| 1529 chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Great chapter, it would make the basis for a great story... although I do think that a ritual involving the sacrifice of a significant portion of the workers within the MOM would have been a better portal option (I can't stand bad guys surviving).
| Diaspared chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
As long as you don't shoehorn in 4 others, and realize that romantic relationships at age 11 are disturbing, I'm all for you continuing this story.
| Contramancer chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Koalas approve! A good showing and possibly a good start. I'd certainly read it.