|Reviews for To Die for the Republic
| Natosi Pranja chapter 41 . 18h
This was…wow! I have to come back to write a longer review. I’ve bookmarked places where I intend to leave comments. Well done!
| Justme7567 chapter 1 . 10/22/2023
Whats thd age differences
| Chi Yagami chapter 26 . 12/20/2021
He called her his attachment! From him, that's incredibly swoon-worthy!
| Goldspark1 chapter 28 . 3/16/2021
Thanks for a great chapter (just started reading these again).
Really love how Sabe's backstory actually comes back in an interesting way. Sabe grew up in an orphanage and at that age, we will latch on to anything. Sabe may have grown up but still has some of that young Sabe stubbornness. Its so great to see this backstory actually have a emotional payoff.
The Matron was a great character. It was so fun to see her call out Sabe for how much of a child she is. And hearing the example of Sabe running away to cry alone rather than someone to hug her while she cried really got me in the feels.
| Goldspark1 chapter 23 . 3/16/2021
Absolutely love this chapter. Here are my reasons.
First, loved how Sabe hated the always perfect weather of Courasant. As a planet completely covered in technology, their is no trees, grass, or natural beauty of Naboo. The perfect weather all the time only adds to the feeling of unnatural. All great descriptions of Courasant. And I have no clue if this was intentional, I also find it a great parallel of the corruption happening on the planet. How powerful forces are working to destroy the republic.
Also, just love the chemistry between Sabe and Obi wan. Obi wan arrived at the perfect time to help cheer up Sabe after she was basically put on the bench. And Sabe helped Obi know what was wrong with Anakin. And during their grocery shopping (honestly, this story is so good that such a mundane thing like grocery shopping can have such great drama), we see how Sabe and Obi-wan can enjoy each others company and tell jokes.
Overall, I just love how each chapter ties into the next. We see how a visit from Anakin is able to get a visit to Obi-wan, and how his visit led to the relevation of Sabe's dreams.
| Goldspark1 chapter 16 . 1/18/2021
Thanks for another great chapter and while you will probably read my reviews in a while, I still wanted to review because of how much I am enjoying this story.
First off, Liked how Sabe got angry. Everything she believes in has been thrown in jeopardy. She just lost her very few free days and her mission to keep Padme Amadala safe has been tested. No wonder this chapter is called Temper.
Also really enjoyed Sabe's retort to Verse about Jar Jar. Yeah, him falling down after seeing four blasters pointed at him sounds like something he would do. And a lot of people can agree with Verse. Yet Sabe made a great point that the Gungan's really did help save Naboo and even if they don't like their representative, they should still show respect. Also, Jar Jar survived the entire Clone Wars so you could at least admire his tenacity.
| Goldspark1 chapter 15 . 1/18/2021
While I haven't reviewed this story as much as I should have, I am greatly enjoying this story.
First off, I love all the slice-of-life stories going on between the major story between Sabe and Obi Want. We see Sabe struggle with living in a hospital for weeks and just getting bored. A very relatable situation without feeling forced into this story. And in this chapter 15, Shopping, it was great to see the return of Wicate. The wheel chair mention made the previous story feel more real. Like the battle of Naboo really did have lasting implications not only on the major story but also for these characters.
| Goldspark1 chapter 4 . 11/15/2020
Really enjoyed this chapter 4, Caught. This was a blast to read.
First off, love how you took a moment to detail us Sabe's condition. While she is getting better, she is still recovering. And throughout the chapter, you mention how her injuries effect her basic movements like hiding under a table.
Loved the part Sabe's second question after seeing Obi-Wan after the obvious why is he here, is When did her grow a beard? I agree, that beard hides to much of his beautiful face. Or at least, that is what Duchess Satine thinks. And just loved Anakin's response of "And do you really think his beard is that important right now?" As a guy, I can relate to not caring all that much about my or other people's hair.
Loved how Obi-Wan was completely serious and asked on if he should get underneath the table to join the table-dwellers. Even if he thinks he is being prank, he is still respectable to others, no matter how bizarre their customs.
Also loved how Sabe is constantly fighting that school yard crush at seeing Obi-wan. The heart loves what the heart loves. How he wanted to escort Sabe back to the hospital. Looked concerned at hearing the story of her injury.
| Goldspark1 chapter 3 . 11/15/2020
Really enjoyed the Breakout chapter. While the meeting between Anakin and Sabe felt a little comic book logic, the conversation they had made me overlook this.
Really enjoyed how Anakin's second question to Sabe is where is Padme. A organic way to show he cares for her but not so obvious because he threw in a bunch of other questions.
Am a bit disappointing Sabe caught on so quickly to chancellor Palpatine. Now, I can understand this if Palpatine was a senator from a different planet than Naboo, as their wouldn't be that nationalistic blind spot, but because he came from Naboo, and on the surface did everything to help queen Amadala in her time of need, it just feels unearned.
Really enjoyed how Sabe opened up to Anakin. She promised herself she would never reveal these future events to anyone, not even Padme. Yet the weeks of bed ridding and the chance to finally get it off her chest felt very natural. And she only revealed it after Anakin promised to not tell anyone. And Anakin's response felt informative. Despite just learning about the Force, he does know the force allows Remissions. Yet by their vague nature, can be incredibly hard to decipher. Yet he told Sabe that such precise events wit her visions were not normal. In your Authors Note, you talk about how you were worried you did the force wrong and had plot holes. Yet for a casual fan like me, the force visions felt very well handled.
Also, thanks for responding to my reviews of the previous story, To Save the Queen.
| Mher chapter 8 . 8/24/2020
This is incredible thank you
| Mher chapter 7 . 8/24/2020
This was a REALLY great chapter, i almost cried. Thanks a lot, you are a wonderful autor.
| westerns never die chapter 41 . 8/6/2020
Just finished after staring last night and I really like this trilogy. Off to begin the third one!
| sophiewhettingsteel chapter 8 . 4/17/2020
this is such a lovely chapter, this whole period is just so nice and wholesome and you can see them growing up and changing. And that things are getting tougher but this just felt like some meaningful fluff. Like fluff is good anyway but you can see how this has had an impact on Obi-Wan and Anakin even in a small way and that's really nice.
| DarthRavager86 chapter 41 . 3/31/2020
Well done. Will be checking out the next story. I look forward to seeing how things might potentially change, since we're already slightly AU.
Also regarding this 'Force Awakens' movie you speak of, there's rumors on the internets that there will be new characters named Ray and Kybo or something like that. Hopefully they don't take too much screen time away from Han, Luke, and Leia.
| Evenstar chapter 41 . 3/20/2020