Reviews for She Who Eats the Light
Brit chapter 7 . 8/9/2013
Please update soon! Great story!
madame thome chapter 7 . 7/30/2013
Well from previous chapters she thinks Hades is handsome and when she sees he is kind to his subjects she has a bit of warmth in her heart for him. But she is very resistant and stubborn. Maybe if she goes and spends some time with her mother it will help. Back and forth a few times may be good for her.
Condemned To Brimstone chapter 6 . 7/30/2013
ASDFGHJKL please update soon!
madame thome chapter 6 . 7/29/2013
This little girl Is so sweet with Sephie but naturally she is loyal to Hades. She seems to basically have Sephie in tow getting her bathed and dressed and leading her around. But she does not want to eat and Hades appearance probably makes her appetite even dimmer. Looks like a long road ahead.
nerdmafia101 chapter 6 . 7/29/2013
I really appreciate you sharing this story with the world ok!
So far the writing and plot is wonderful :)
flowergirl275 chapter 5 . 7/27/2013
aww poor persephone :( I like this chapter a lot though! Please continue! :)
madame thome chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
Poor Sephie she is just trying to get home. If by some miracle she does later feel something for Hades will Eris become her rival? The lady makes a first impression of good competition. Oh no what a mean trick she thinks she is escaping and she finds hell. Sure glad that she gets rescued quickly. Adelphe is a very smart little girl she will just sitting with Sephie until she is ready to be helped. Such a sweet child!
Condemned To Brimstone chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
Herp. Please update soon! Asdfghjkl.
madame thome chapter 4 . 7/22/2013
Sephie has just gotton an overdose of chill and thrill. A good pass out may be just the therapy to deal with this stress.
flowergirl275 chapter 3 . 7/22/2013
this is starting to get interesting! Can't wait for more!
madame thome chapter 3 . 7/21/2013
The dying flower to attract Sephie is such an origional move. Naturally she pities it and heals it. When Hades sees how sweet and tender she is to a mere flower he just cannot do naught but grab her. Hope she is not to terrified for too long.
madame thome chapter 2 . 7/19/2013
Yes a bath can be a very relaxing thing but a mama like this no.
mckoy12345678910 chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
You have to continue!
madame thome chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Good beginning very descriptive. I love how you begin with her having a relationship with Apollo. Please update soon.