Reviews for Right on Target
liela-k chapter 26 . 44m
All i can say i damn lol hot hot hot lol
liela-k chapter 25 . 1h
Lmaoooo Love this bella makes me wish i knew how to throw knives
liela-k chapter 23 . 3h
Completely infatuated with this story. Love these characters omg cant express that enough.
SarcasticBimbo chapter 25 . 4/29
Why would any of that be Edward's fault. He didn't ask her to put her hands on him. Sometimes women are just crazy and won't take no for an answer, but for Bella to blame him when she saw how determined Tia was the last time they were near each other, she should just chill the fuck out. LOL
crazycats7 chapter 25 . 4/26
maybe if he wasn't such a manwhore it wouldn't be his fault at all
Guest chapter 22 . 4/16
oh no, he slept with someone after he met her... damn, that's usually a deal breaker for me... and I was really liking this at first, thinking he stopped being a whore...
Siriusmunchkin chapter 45 . 3/16
That was a whole lot of fun. Love the action and fight violence. Such fun and loveable characters.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 43 . 3/16
That was a lot of fun! The more of that stuff the better.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 36 . 3/15
You have such fun and interesting storylines. Laugh out loud frequently.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 33 . 3/15
The only family member not to be trusted has to be the one that isn't really a family member. Rose.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 32 . 3/15
Thank you Bella. Wish more people would tell Emmett to shut up and grow up.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 29 . 3/15
No Grandma Cullen seal of approval yet.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 21 . 3/14
Grandma Cullen is better than awesome.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 19 . 3/14
Don't think Aro's very happy with the Masen/Cullen family. Positive they are less than thrilled that he's still breathing.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 18 . 3/14
A shooting war. This could be a lot of fun.
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