|Reviews for Right on Target|
| TwiSagaAddict chapter 33 . 3/4
| RuthlessDreamer chapter 46 . 3/2
Nicely done. Some chapters drug out a bit and, at first, I was worried this was going to be a "they tease the entire time until they finally fuck in the last chapter" story, but was glad I was wrong. All-in-all, it was very entertaining and I always love me some Assassinward. :D
| TwiFanfictionRecs chapter 1 . 3/1
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| sholtsclaw698 chapter 46 . 2/23
| Guest chapter 38 . 2/23
Somehow i think it's Eleazar or Allistair due to the fact that Allistair wants to get his family back for murdering his fed girlfriend three years ago and Eleazar is a bitch.
| saintfudge chapter 46 . 2/24
will read sequel when i few more chapters in .. hate waiting for updates im to impatient ...lol ...have fun
| MatingInspires chapter 46 . 2/23
| MatingInspires chapter 37 . 2/23
Who is the leak in the family?
| dana2928 chapter 46 . 2/21
Love this story! I was really glad to see a "good Tanya". Can't wait for the sequel!
| sherryola chapter 45 . 2/21
Wow! What a ride, and so damn fun. i loved it. I love how both edward and Bella grew so much through their relationship. the whole crazy damn family was a blast. I like that Rose/Angela ended up being ok. Loved bella hitting Jacob with one of her knives but too bad he survived. I didn't really see Eleazar as the bad guy, but I didn't have much attachment to him so it didn't matter to me. There's still so much to happen in the sequel and I can't wait. By the way, could you add me to your facebook group. My facebook is .com
I think that's it. anyway, my FB name is sherriola.
Great story. I've really enjoyed it so much.
| sherryola chapter 26 . 2/21
Much better. at least she believed him, or seems to believe him.
| sherryola chapter 25 . 2/21
Ok, I take back everything I said about Bella being strong and confident. she's a frigging idiot. Man, why is it so normal for most women to assume the worst before asking questions and yet expect men to believe us? women are full of double standards. So, no, i'm blaming bella on this one, not edward.
| sherryola chapter 23 . 2/21
yay. and i loved your rant at the top of my chapter. I was going to say something similar that Edward wasn't doing anything wrong because he and B weren't together. But I love that you made Bella confident strong enough to know that his past isn't what's important. And yay he finally admitted he has feelings. it must be so scary for him.
| sherryola chapter 15 . 2/21
So sorry your stories got pulled here. I hate what this site is doing to so many authors. Is your username the same on all the other sites? i'm trying to use ao3 whenever possible because it's the only one besides here that I can review on.
| sherryola chapter 13 . 2/21
That ending scene with the thunder storm was wonderful we got to see the vulnerable side of Bella and the sweet side of edward. I liked it very much.