Reviews for Dizzy
knownothingable chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
I like the atmosphere of this. It's all very intense and threatening.
OnlySnakesCanLove chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Very enjoyable. Some sentences are awkward, but that by no means cuts down on the story in any way. I love the unique take on Triptocaine erasing any memory Jayden has of his relationship to Blake, having this unique experience as though it was their first time. Then the lines Blake has; "Come here and let me fuck you, you little whore.", are mouthwatering.

My favorite line, "Only Blake could blemish the autumn aromas with his own." Nice.