Reviews for Twist of Fate
Just call me ZS chapter 22 . 9/9
Hope you keep on with this story! I know it's been a while, but life is like that. I REALLY enjoy this story, as Naruto is learning a bunch of things and meeting people in different orders. But he's not overpowered. He didn't fight that jonin sand single handedly wipe the floor with them. He's still that goofy lovable ninja we all know, including his surprising insight and unique way of approaching problems. He still wants to save everyone, but he's also been tempered a little with Zabuza's way of life. I really want to see how this goes. Love that he has so many teachers! And zabuza getting annoyed about it!
Yami no Ninaite chapter 22 . 11/7/2023
Great story. Hope you regain that spark. Thank you for continuing to work on the story.
sparrowhawk13 chapter 20 . 9/21/2023
OMG I absolutely love this story! I was rereading and couldn't believe I missed this chapter!
Ashera fanfics chapter 2 . 2/24/2023
Purple hairYugao/Anko. Since Yugao has a cat mask, I'd say Anko.
Queen cat spark chapter 22 . 1/29/2023
It was a lot of fun to read
thegrison chapter 12 . 1/10/2023
Ok it is a very common mistake but muscle memory is NOT muscles doing sometimes drilled in to them so much it creates memory. It is your BRAIN doing the same drills that it knows the nerves to use in a slowly better pattern so the drill is smoother and faster each time. Again it is your brain knowing the nerves to use. Even knocked out your brain knows what and when to do things. The brain is never truly out unless brain dead but wven then there is some function in it. So yes clones can help with just about everything but the muscle building and physical change to the body.
Yeza Nairomof chapter 22 . 8/18/2022
Awesome story, keep up the good work.
Dauntes chapter 22 . 7/19/2022
This is a seriously enjoyable story. I really hope you come back to it at some point. Thanks for writing it!
GoatTakingAShower chapter 2 . 6/16/2022
The council is fanon, other than koharu, homura, and(as of shippuden) danzo. Civilian council is fanon only, there is no council to be strict with canon wise, as prior to shippuden the only two who were ever even visible were koharu and homura, who did nothing relevant whatsoever.
Great Destroyer Hurricane chapter 22 . 6/10/2022
This was an awesome fic. One of the best if not the best I've ever read. I don't know whether you abandoned this story or not but I like it so much.

Notice: You have gained a new follower.
Golden Wind God chapter 13 . 6/5/2022
love the bruce lee reference
Golden Wind God chapter 1 . 6/2/2022
nice
humancyrax chapter 2 . 3/8/2022
boy watching the third boss up on the council like that was everything the third was far too hands off with the naruto situation in canon glad he realized it in this story.
Lekka chapter 22 . 3/2/2022
I like this fanfic
RedHood001 chapter 22 . 10/14/2021
HAH! This story is amazing!

I love the characterization and all the changes that are happening from Naruto meeting with Iwa Shinobi to Zabuza and Haku along with Itachi and Kisame. It's very fascinating to see how much he's changing these people already.

It also makes me feel bad. Itachi and Kisame are still in the Akatsuki after all. We know what their mission is gonna be.

Though, I love the fact that Naruto is getting the chance to meet other Uzumaki Clan members. I definitely expected that reaction when Noriko spoke of the way Karin's Mom and her are treated. I'm really excited for Naruto to actually meet Fu and then Karin soon. The former due to the Jinchūriki stuff and the latter because of their familial connection. Naruto is craving so many forms of kinship, be they blood or Bijuu type of connection.

This is amazing!
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