|Reviews for Twist of Fate|
| Shadow the Ranger chapter 2 . 10/25/2012
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! 8 update soon!
| MC chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
keep it coming...
| Grief and Sorrow chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
Yes, go Hokage-jiji. I can't wait for the next chapter. Bad on Kakashi for just leaving the kid, the forest of death is no place for a nap. Bleh. :)
| TigrezzTail chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
Woohoo! Go Old Man Sarutobi! Too bad it's too little to late for Naruto. I can't wait to see how he's doing with Zabuza and Haku. And I can't BELIEVE Kakashi was stupid enough to leave a child out in the open, let alone the Forest of Death, after having been sleep genjutsued.
| fco ala chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
in sparow rin
| 21X chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
Oh man, your story is making me feel emotions. Powerful ones, this is nicely written in my opinion. I cannot wait for the next update! I loved the scene in which the face if the fourth Hokage was crying to see his son leave.
| Freshino chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
i am hooked on your story, looking forward to more so please update soon...
| MC chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
very good fic.
| fanficreader71 chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
Great chapter, I will be looking forward to reading your next udpate
| Little X-Kid chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
That was great :) I've read some similar stories, but I think yours is one if not the best one I've seen.
| knoteach chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
I heartily agree with you about Sarutobi and the council. They got far too out of control, in what was supposed to be a military village. Good idea and a geat start, I look forward to seeing where it goes from here.
| Darkryus chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
sparrows rin right?
| darkhuntressxir chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
haha.. serve the council right!
| Simgr101 chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
best fic ive found relating to naru leaving the village :) its hard to describe but i love it :) PLEASE CONTINUE
im guessing sparrow might be ummm yamato perhaps?
sarutobi is written really well :) bout time those council members got put in their place for half the shit that happened to naruto ;p
i came accross a story relating to obito say if he accidently time travelled instead of being found by madara. back then his goals and what not were the exact same as naruto's ;p
is nagato and obito going to ally naruto at all ;p would like to see them trying to find a path to peach outside the tsukuomi thing ;p
so many ideas come to mind here :) keep going :) i kinda wanna see now when zabuza and naruto now go to fight kakashi and what not if that happens. will be interesting how things play out. SO CONTINUE DAMN IT!
| MC chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Awesome. Great start.
the crying hokage was a nice touch..
continue the good work