Please tell me that the horror parents die in this!

I truly hope he saves her. How can people allow this to continue. Someone has to know.

Please tell me Alice didn't see Edward; Bella's in enough trouble-for something she didn't do-as it is. I kinda want to swoop in and kidnap her so she'll be safe.

God her family really makes me want to puke! I still want to grab her and squeeze the poor girl and then take an axe to her family.

Phil makes me want to vom, so, you know, well done on the creep factor there. Creepy, twisted fucker.
Truly, I know I say this shit a lot but your writing is so fucking amazing and it just keeps getting better and better. I don't know how you do it but fuck am I glad you do.
Love, love, love this Bella and Edward so much. Love YOU more.

My poor mangled heart.

Way to work around the rules, Bella. I was wondering who her parents' eyes and ears were, if Alice went to the same school. God the poor girl living 17 years in terror! Thank goodness for Edward's response. Nice to hear that he noticed her before. This is gonna be really intriguing.

Sweet, wonderful meeting between the two. Of course, it's seems to be the calm before the storm with these two.

I like your Alice twists! Keeps life exciting. (I do the same to my Alices!)

Great job!

Prim really looking forward to reading this story. It is different than anything else I'm readying right now and it sounds like it will be very interesting. I already love Bella and Edward and hate Charlie, Renee and Alice. I hope Bella's family learn their lesson and get what they deserve in the end. See you tomorrow.

Whatever you want to call it, I'm in! You are skilled at story-crafting, my dear - so I shall gladly hold on for this sure-to-be multi-faceted story. Excellent job already of setting up Bella's extraordinarily dire circumstances.

Thanks for mixing it up...I like Alice being bad. :)

I truly hope Edward can save her. Looking forward to more soon, thanks.

Ok, you convinced me. I'm in. Reading with my fingers over my eyes. Hoping it won't keep me up at night! Poor Bella! I'm already nervous and worried for her. And don't get me started on Alice. But I love Edward.

Thanks for your review reply on GH. I'm so so sorry to hear about your dad. I had a very hard time getting over my dad's death. I actually started having anxiety issues and gained a bunch of weight. Which I have finally now lost and gotten over. But everyone grieves differently and I hope that writing is helping you. And seriously, anon reviewers, in the words of Kathy Griffin (don't judge-shes a guilty pleasure), can SUCK IT! Lol!

Bella was really resourceful in thinking about writing instead of talking...she does have to be wary of Alice telling her parents...

Crazy trains are the best ones to ride. Because you never know where they'll end up! :D

I'm intrigued!