|Reviews for Shadows Of The Past|
| still kat chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
It was a little confusing, and probably longer than it needed to be. Some of your sentences did tend to get very long so that I by the end I sometimes forgot how it had started. If you fixed that, I think the flow would be a lot better (you're not alone in the long sentence thing :)).
This raises quite a few questions: Why is Katie going back to Hogwarts? What happened between her and Oliver? Why is she so anxious? Overall, it was all right, but I didn't feel invested enough in it. With a strong storyline, it could work very well. Keep writing!
| Laceisoverrated chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
So much build up! I just want to know what happened... but I'm also scared that it will be sad. Hope you update soon )
| sangkar chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
[Congratulations, you have gotten to the next round of the Multichap Competition.]
I liked the way you began the fic. It was sort of normal, mundane, but interesting at the same time, because of the way you constructed it. Good job with that.
Your punctuation isn't the best, though, and I recommend a beta for that.
The dialogue between your characters seemed a little forced, too. You could work on that.
Overall, you've done a fairly good job, but a few things could be improved.