Reviews for Gohan And Videl - The Story
Guest chapter 2 . 10/21/2014
Update pls...
And and Haiya Dragon is vegetarian not meat eater...
Guest chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
If someone ever gave me that poem I would slap them silly
gotenks411 chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
NINE DAYS TILL THE CELL GAMES! HE IS A TEEN THEN WHY THE CRAP IS HE GOING TO FORTH GRADE! THATS RETARDED! WHY DO ALL THESE STUPID PEOPLE THINK HES A LITTLE KID! GOHAN GOT YONG LOOKS FROM HIS SAIYAN SIDE AND EVERYONE CALLS HUM A LITTLE KID! HES AT LEEST 16 NEER THE CELL GAMES! THIS IS WHY IS WHY I HATE FANFICS WHEN HE IS A KID! NOBODY KNOWS HE WAS A FRIGGEN TEEN!
Guest chapter 2 . 12/7/2013
moar
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
During the cell games gohan was 12
Eyea chapter 2 . 6/30/2013
Make another chapter make another chapter make another chapter I'm gunna keep chanting till u make another chapter :)
Your biggest fan chapter 2 . 6/19/2013
PLEASE PLEAS PLEASE PLEEEEAAAASSSSE UPDATE
IAmASaiyanGirlWarrior13 chapter 2 . 10/24/2012
Mooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooore! I want to read more!
SSJAguila chapter 2 . 10/24/2012
Well I would set you should change your story to 'humor' category because this chapter really did not seem to add anything to the story. The flow of your story seems a bit off I'm not always sure how fast time is passing since. Seems like its one day that he does not get to eat then it the next day on the next paragraph.
gohanFanfics chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
haha lol this was better and the ending was funny :) keep it up
Kyuubi123Girl chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Great story really goo job
jimthebear2 chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Can't wait for chapter 2 !
gohanFanfics chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
pretty nice i got lost alot though somehow some of it didnt seem to match up..."-_- but still nice job