Reviews for What Should Have Been
Eleanor C chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
I like the idea of Edith striking out on her own completely. Interested to see how it all pans out.
moonshinesally chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
I had to go back to the first chapter to see what happend before. A different approach and I'm looking forward to read more soon!
Loveedith chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
Good for Edith! I'm glad she decides to support herself!
Baron Munchausen chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
This could have happened all too easily. Frighteningly, it still could.

But we trust you to find a way that true love can win through!
Loveedith chapter 2 . 7/29/2013
I wonder what will happen next!
Lady Kiddymonster chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
This is pretty good, are you going to write more.
Mother of Tears chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
This is a good beginning. I like your prose.
Lady Thomas chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Interesting!
Thymelady chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Interesting set up! And Edith being the surviving twin while her brother died - interesting.