Reviews for Judging A Book By It's Cover
Flyby2 chapter 1 . 11/19/2019
I’m really enjoying this story. However, the grammar and spelling errors are so distracting. I wish you could do a good grammatical editing job on this and it would be so much better. Examples: There are several run-on sentences. There are misspelled words. Please learn the difference between then and than. Then is related to time (The team talked about Reid. Then Reid appeared at the door.). Than is used for comparison. (Reid is taller than JJ). Another thing, the phrase is “brains, not brawn“. You wrote “brains, not bronze”. Brawn means physical strength. I hope you’ll accept this constructive criticism. You have a talent for storytelling. Don’t let it be overshadowed by grammatical errors.
Triforce Dragons chapter 8 . 10/21/2019
I love the ending! Morgen is just so right to be protective of Reid.
ShortFandomPerson chapter 4 . 5/19/2018
Go swallow 2 more watermelons Jordan please. Feel the pain!
ShortFandomPerson chapter 3 . 5/19/2018
Jordan Just please fuck of. Go swallow a watermelon.
ShortFandomPerson chapter 1 . 5/19/2018
Reid is so damn smart!
Wouldjya chapter 1 . 4/4/2018
Wow this is beautiful. A lovely cinnamon roll and someone to hate? Its perfect i live it and thanks for the chapter lengths
Brookie Twiling chapter 7 . 6/18/2017
Good story. Well, apart from the fact that you seemed too explain most of Spencer's behaviour away due to his autism (something that I personally, as an autistic person, hate). But other than that, nice.
The Lilac Bear chapter 8 . 6/4/2017
Thank Goodness! I love this story!
Jojo chapter 1 . 4/12/2017
It's called Asperger Syndrome. Just for your information. Apart from that big mistake, I think your story is really good!
Guest chapter 8 . 1/25/2017
I love this story. Poor Reid hade to go through all of that. That guy (forgot his name) was such a jerk I litterily wanted to kill him! Like how could someone be that much of an ass! I know he's a made up charecter but still... He hurt Reid. :(
lizyeh2000 chapter 7 . 7/25/2016
Loved your story , now favourited!
Evylino chapter 7 . 2/23/2016
I love your story. 3
Guest chapter 7 . 1/24/2016
Excellent story
Debi chapter 5 . 1/12/2016
Please! go back and correct percent into precinct. At least I think it's precinct. Otherwise the story makes no sense. And you have a good story line going.
AdminCritic chapter 7 . 12/11/2015
This is an overal story review:
I do not think you did your homework proper for this story. The language you use for your character is basic and crude, even Morgan though he is not of a superior intellect would definitely not call someone with Aspergers a "social retard" repetitively, mean people would do this - he would use the appropriate wording such as "social deficient" or "social ineptness". I think overal you do not know how to address as such someon with this particular syndrome so I do believe you should do your proper research. Your character Agent Jordan is predictable yet a weak character as he has no flaw he is just written to be a bad character. This is weak writing. He too would be a professional thought a dislikable man he was far to quick to hate without any proper reason. I suggest you also get a beta as your spelling and grammar are irritating to read and therefore need to be corrected. This could have potential if you do your planning properly. In addition the language of the characters is repetitive and there far to much 'Umm'' 'Ya' and 'Dude'. These are silly words, if English is not your native language then I have no smite however finding a beta would improve this.
This is constructive feedback, it helps point out areas that you may overlook, however if you are going to perceive this as a flame then do so with accepting what is written. As I said, the story has great potential, just remember to edit and proofread before posting, and plan properly.
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