Reviews for Alistair the Mage
thepkrmgc chapter 23 . 12/29/2014
while the whole "once in the multiverse" thing is a bit much you cover some interesting material nonetheless, cant wait for the next chapter!
thepkrmgc chapter 22 . 12/29/2014
so thats the second child flemeth mentioned, I wonder what he's been up to, and why fiona didnt clear things up when alistair decided to go searching for his sister? it should be interesting when the real second child enters the picture though
thepkrmgc chapter 21 . 12/29/2014
its good to see that cullens well on the way to becoming the heroic templar/inquisition general that a freakishly large number of people are obsessed with i suspect that Emilia wont be returning his affections

nice work on talia's POV btw
thepkrmgc chapter 20 . 12/29/2014
i half expected you to kill angelica off, the point would be to shock us and introduce alistair to some of the hardships of warden life (if you join the rest of alistairs freinds it would be weird if all survived, perhaphs jowan would be the casualty since the others cannonically survive) it should be interesting to see how fiona affects things, and how long until alistair becomes aware of her secret
thepkrmgc chapter 19 . 12/29/2014
the herald stuff takes on new meaning after inquisition, but in a good way

nice job on the teenage awkwardness, watching alistair suffer is quite amusing, i can wait to see when the mage prince (and probably warden by that point) is reunited with his childhood freinds
thepkrmgc chapter 18 . 12/29/2014
nice job on uldred's plots, though blood magic used for mind control is insane and pure evil he's not entirely unsympathetic
thepkrmgc chapter 17 . 12/29/2014
so gregor know alistairs parentage, and uldred will find out soon enough, it seems like the mad enchanter's already turned to the dark side though
thepkrmgc chapter 16 . 12/29/2014
its good that things are speeding up, it should be interesting to see the young battlemage!alistair affects and is affected by uldred
thepkrmgc chapter 15 . 12/29/2014
yay for the harrowing pact, i imagine that the harrowing is a lot scaryer from an in universe perspective
thepkrmgc chapter 14 . 12/29/2014
i agree on duncan's negligence, and its good that some changes are made: though preferably in the background while the main plot progresses
thepkrmgc chapter 13 . 12/29/2014
fever dreams make for weird fare, though the whole abomination thing makes alistair's circle life a lot less idyllic
thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 12/29/2014
it seems like alistair has an admirer, his knack for heroism is bound to earn him a lot of brownie points

its good that angelica's an arcane warrior, i bet alistair would take to the role like a champ
thepkrmgc chapter 11 . 12/29/2014
nice bit of character development on alistair's part, though i bet he will regret his choice soon enough
thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 12/29/2014
interesting to see maric's pov, i wonder who the second born is, the human noble?
thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 12/29/2014
it seems like alistairs hero worship of the wardens is pretty much set in stone, i wonder why maric is being a more attentive parent then cannon?
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