|Reviews for Kaleidoscope|
| LovelyFarron chapter 5 . 11/18/2013
This was a heartwarming story with excellent characterization! It reminded me of why I love the relationship between Garrus and Shepard so much, even if they do have fights and disagreements from time to time.
My favorite character's recall would have to be Zaeed's-though the part with Wrex was adorable too-and an interesting way to approach the situation when Shepard had Garrus spare Sidonis's life (though in the end Shep was right; it was HIS call to make, not hers).
The part with Joker and EDI was super cute too. I just loved it all!
| Alerisya chapter 2 . 8/7/2013
I really love this story. The characters feel so spot on. I think Zaeed's part is my favorite out of the whole thing.
What Zaeed says is profound, and I can hear his voice when I read that.
I read this last night, but I decided I needed to come back to tell you how much I liked it.
| Officer Hot-Pants chapter 5 . 2/5/2013
Well that was a rather abrupt ending.
| BoutsofInsanity42 chapter 5 . 2/5/2013
Great stuff. Glad to see it end and not continue on into the void. Enjoyed the story. Chapter 4 was your strongest chapter.
| Adams7 chapter 5 . 2/5/2013
"'She really was interested in a relationship between two people who were born in the aftermath of war and mutual hatred'"
Hmm... Me thinks that batarian girl was not just searching for closure for Aratoht, but also reassurance. About what? I think you know ;)
So... Sequel? Or no? I'm fine either way. I think this is a great place to leave off, but I wouldn't mind you continuing it.
| servantofclio chapter 5 . 2/5/2013
I like this as a finale-bringing it back to our heroes and having the unseen filmmaker get some... I don't know, closure, maybe.
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/5/2013
This was really good!
| Jessie07 chapter 5 . 2/4/2013
| MomentousMinutiae chapter 5 . 2/4/2013
I really enjoyed this. I'll be sure to keep reading any Shakarian fiction you write in the future. :D
| RamenKnight chapter 5 . 2/4/2013
Nicely done. Wrapped it up at good time. Left was wanting more, but also left us satisfied. So many people have trouble understanding WHEN to have the story end.
| MomentousMinutiae chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
One continuity problem - Emily Wong is dead by the events of Mass Effect 3. Still, loving this so far! Keep it up.
| Officer Hot-Pants chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
I like the style of this. Looking forward to more.
| Planetar chapter 4 . 1/23/2013
Good. Very good, in fact.
To be frank, I'm a little sad to see it ended. At least, I presume this is an ending. While it would probably be interesting to see what Shepard and Garrus have to say, but I'm also cool with this being it. But, if you decide to prove me wrong, I certainly won't complain. In any case, thank you for enjoyable reading that has made my day brighter and funnier.
Also yeah, Tali's reaction is probably the best.
| waylsind chapter 4 . 1/22/2013
Aw, is this really the end? I was just starting to enjoy this, and I really wanted to know more about the batarian girl. Well anyway, I think you portrayed all of the various character's perspectives well. I liked your interpretations of what post-Reaper War Normandy crew members would be like, and how you put in unique flashbacks that were canon but not from the game.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/22/2013
Can't wait for the next chapter!