|Reviews for Focal Point|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
amazing love it :)
| Whimsicott chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
O-omai...so very hawt *u*
| forever-yaoi-lover chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
when r u going to make new story's!
| SCREAMING ANON chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
YEAH, PROBABLY GOING TO GO WITH 'CREEPY GUY-THING', SHINICHI. WATCHING IZAYA LIKE THAT.
HOT-SEX SCENE, YEAAAAH
THIS SHIP- I SHOULD SAY NO. I CAN'T HAVE ANYMORE SHIPS, MY GOD, I HAVE LIKE, THE MOST POWERFUL ARMY OF SHIPS, THEY ARE SO MANY I COULD PUT ENGLAND TO SHAME.
BUT WHATEEEEVER, THIS SHIP HAVE SAILED.
AND I LOVE IT.
SO THANK YOU AGAIN FOR THIS WONDERFUL PIECE OF WRITING
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Yes! We need more tsukumoya! Loved every bit of this.
| heyalove43 chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
awww that was soo good :)
the last part had me laughing :D
good job :)
keep up the good work!
| felisceleris chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
That was great! I want more please
| Rikka-tan chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
this was interesting... as weird as it may be(since tsukumoya was a thing, not human, i guess?), you made me ship this pairing XD
also your first person POV was really good! there's really nothing to worried about. it so unique to read from tsukumoyacchi POV :3
| o0Kairi0o chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
/dies of nose bleed
THAT. WAS. GREAT!
AHAHAHA At Izaya beating Tsukumoya at his own game XD
Even if this is your first time writing in first person it's great!