Reviews for Focal Point
Edainwen chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
Hell you just made my mind blow! With this hell! The thougth that tsukumoya was waching all in his intangible form is just sosososo great! N hell i truly wanted to see a fic when tsukumoya dream came true... n... the thought of a robot, android to b more acurate came to me and now that im writing ut souns kind of lame fot the kind of oficial IC for that nut... i just thought that tsukumoya find the way n he put himself the most of him at least like concentring a large part of him in an android prototipe nehhh ... tsugaru. Yeahhh! Now that i thouth it tsukumoya's way are nothing like the fan-made-almost-oficial-IC for tsugaru but it was the thought like... don't have a body seach for a way to punish izaya for what he do in the end of the fic hahahaa (btw I loved ! That!) And he find the android prototipes and with the thought that he wanted to be shizuo (at least in rol never that animal drived for instint -tryibg tsukumoya pov i love shizuo's logic off lake of it hahhahahaha) he will put his ehhhh hand? In the proyec that ended in take shizuo like the model of the android... hhahaha i totally can see tsukuyoma changing the plane of said android... n hell i kind totally see tsukuyama changing the second ... or first (after all he was the 1st release don't?) Planes to make an izaya like android just to piss him hahhaha n hell my stupid mind keep flying! He latter thing of 'get in' in the 2nd android... hell i also thought that his names were so similiar but im in doubt of tsugaru ... i would want a tsukuyoma like so all tease n fuck izaya in a desk part but i thought that maibe izaya's humanity could be so confusing that he emded enjoying more a simil android compaby like here come 1st android still in the fabric but visitated while in while to nkow how the proyect is going so hell that he is similar to izaya is like better vertion of him izaya.2 ... o.O i need to tell you this just became a prompt... hahhaha hell how will be the pairings? N hell did not even put ahizuo in the ways hahhaha woul loce to see him all possesive of izaya!" Hell would be... shizaya,sided tsukumoya-izaya, sided tsugaru-izaya, tsupy? Hahhaa i realized i don't know how to write tsugaru n psyque haahahha well what a mess! Hhahaha also i totally see tsumoya enjoying tha capacity of just feel so he enjoying the nature n pacifics is like a totally correct development for that hahhaha so there my brillian mind put tsugaru in Ic! (Like and latte develope very late hahahhaha) i enjoyed a lot your fic will go to my fav vecouse it make me write a review from mi cellphone n that i hate it to do so x) see ya i hope you acept my prompt xP
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
amazing love it :)
Whimsicott chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
O-omai...so very hawt *u*
forever-yaoi-lover chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
when r u going to make new story's!
SCREAMING ANON chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
YEAH, PROBABLY GOING TO GO WITH 'CREEPY GUY-THING', SHINICHI. WATCHING IZAYA LIKE THAT.
HOT-SEX SCENE, YEAAAAH
TROLL!IZAYA YEAAAH
THIS SHIP- I SHOULD SAY NO. I CAN'T HAVE ANYMORE SHIPS, MY GOD, I HAVE LIKE, THE MOST POWERFUL ARMY OF SHIPS, THEY ARE SO MANY I COULD PUT ENGLAND TO SHAME.
BUT WHATEEEEVER, THIS SHIP HAVE SAILED.
AND I LOVE IT.
SO THANK YOU AGAIN FOR THIS WONDERFUL PIECE OF WRITING
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Yes! We need more tsukumoya! Loved every bit of this.
heyalove43 chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
awww that was soo good :)
the last part had me laughing :D
good job :)
keep up the good work!
felisceleris chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
That was great! I want more please
Rikka-tan chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
this was interesting... as weird as it may be(since tsukumoya was a thing, not human, i guess?), you made me ship this pairing XD
also your first person POV was really good! there's really nothing to worried about. it so unique to read from tsukumoyacchi POV :3
o0Kairi0o chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
#$%&*(())_*)&(O%$U#Y%

/dies of nose bleed

THAT. WAS. GREAT!

AHAHAHA At Izaya beating Tsukumoya at his own game XD

Even if this is your first time writing in first person it's great!