|Reviews for Blind|
| lizziejean123 chapter 2 . 4/12
there are tears in my eyes, the sweetness, joy, positivity in this story. You've written about these characters, but so much of what you have said, especially at the end, is so true, and if could embrace it I think our relationships would be so much better.
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/21/2012
That was so,so very beautiful my ,many thanks for writing and posting xxxx The vocabulary and your use of description left me ,truly AMAZING:) The way they both circled each other,checking the other one way their bodies melded together as more secrets that's for sure.
PERFECTION for that's what it was was in the entire chapter,but particularly in the last paragraph.I've read and re-read it so many xxxx
Lots of Love and Best Wishes xxxx3
| Viola chapter 2 . 12/5/2012
Really appreciated this story. Beautifully written. You've portrayed their falling into each other and what they feel so well, and with a gentle and intimate touch.
Hope you keep writing LTM stories, you're a very gifted writer. Many thanks for sharing.
| Roadrunnerz chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
This was just perfect.
Loved this line: -His arms wrap around her torso languidly. He'd done this a thousand times and every single time is like a warm welcome home.
Love how you capture their intimacy. That you leave some room for imagination.
Thanks for sharing.
| CalliopeSphia chapter 2 . 11/28/2012
That is a beautiful story, thank you!
| bluecube76 chapter 2 . 11/25/2012
Brilliant, amazingly well written. Great insight into the characters.
Hope you write more stories, as I will look forward to reading them.
| solveariddle chapter 2 . 11/25/2012
Oh, I've waited so long for you to continue this. You describe beautifully how they literally "fall" into each other pushed by their love and the circumstances that finally, finally let them really see each other. Thank you so much for updating.
One question: Is this supposed to be the end? Or do you plan to add another chapter?
| scasfra chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
I absolutly loved this! I whish I could write like you someday because you are one of the best I know at expressing not only what they think but what they feel in writen words. It's like music, only a diferent type. Don't ever stop!
| AndromedaAiken chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
WHY did you stop there? Please please continue!
| KarenJC chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
OMG my lovely what an immense chapter that , many thanks for writing and posting xxxxx
You've tapped into the Cal and Gillian characters perfectly IMO. I know actions sometimes speak volumes,but words can be just as seems to be the case beautiful words they were , many thanks for writing them xxx Some people find it difficult to tell someone face to face how yhey're feeling even though their emotions/bodies "give them away".But give a person a piece of paper to write a letter/poem(How old do I sound! LOL apologies) or a computer to compose an email,or in this case the possible start to a book,then the feelings begin to flow readily;)
CANNOT WAIT to read more.
Many, many thanks once again xxxx
Lots of Love and Best Wishes xxxx3
| madmother2 chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Great chapter. :) Can't wait for more.
| solveariddle chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Oh, this is so wonderful... I can't describe it in a better way, but somehow the atmosphere you created made me float through the chapter, weightless, surrounded by your words and some wonderful Callian magic. Yeah, I'm obviously in a "I miss LTM" mood. I guess you can tell that. ;)
Can't wait to read what happens next - now that the cards are on the table...
| Shepherdinha chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Nice chapter! Will there be a chap 2? Please say yes or just update :) can't wait.
| Roadrunnerz chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Oooh...evil leaving it there!
Love that Cal put his words on paper (or pixels. :) ) when he couldn't bring himself to say them aloud. Kind of fitting I think.
| LieBones chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Oh please don't take too long to give us another chapter! So well written by Cal but will he have words now? Thanks for a new story :)