|Reviews for The Five Stages of Grief|
| Ann chapter 3 . 4/6/2013
Poignant and moving without being cloying or contrived. Powerful! I really enjoyed it!beautifully written!
| GalitMirav chapter 7 . 3/31/2013
Captain, you are the best! I really wish you wrote for the show. This was beautiful..amazing...just wonderful.
You captured the essense of the characters - No one was OOC. I love how Emma no longer owes Rumple anything - very creative and true. The ship tease with Granny and Geppetto was cute too (yeah, I'm behind them as well). I love this line in chapter 6: "even without August there to unite them, they'd all somehow become a family." *sniff*. The first time I read this, I think I was almost in tears at the end of that chapter. And then of course the happy ending of chapter 7 - so perfect!
Wooden Swan, Charming Family Feels, Booth Family Feels, Geppetto Family Feels...everything was spot-on! You always write excellent stories and this is one of your best ones. Don't ever stop :)
| SLopez chapter 7 . 11/1/2012
How do you flawless? :)
I loved everything about this story, and this chapter is definitely the best way to end it.
And can I just point out that Henry is the most precious thing ever? :)
Good job, captain!
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| evincis chapter 7 . 11/1/2012
Thank you for publishing this story. It was very sweet. :)
| Call Brandybuck chapter 7 . 10/31/2012
This chapter is fantastic :) I didn't realize you actually brought him back until a little ways into the chapter. Great work
| NaomiBlue chapter 7 . 10/31/2012
Yay, I was right. Thank you for warm and fluffy ending.
| kelli maguire chapter 7 . 10/31/2012
Amazing chapter. We got everything combined in one chapter. A reunion, a baby, a marriage. Thankyou so much for this ending. You did very well at the angst though. It killed me, and this just picked me right back up. I love when you do the fluff. It's just always so overwhelming, and picks my day right up. I actually get excited and squeal when I see you, and the wife update your exquisite stories
| Ash chapter 6 . 10/30/2012
Really loving the story :D Can't wait for the next chapter!
| foreverstartsrightnow chapter 6 . 10/28/2012
Emma Gepetto ;_;
| miley-avril chapter 6 . 10/28/2012
Another amazing chapter!
| Anna chapter 6 . 10/28/2012
nope nope nope nope... stop making me cry!
| Anna chapter 6 . 10/28/2012
What happened... didn't he come back? OMG... I'm confused...Why do you want me to cry...omg... and the Geppetto family feels... omg... this is too damn sad... I need to know what's happening so PLEASE update soooon! *omg...but she told him she loved him**and that 'about time, Princess' omg OMFG* *noooooooooooo* *my cries* BRING HIM BACK, PLEASE, BRING HIM BACK!
| SLopez chapter 5 . 10/28/2012
This chapter was the most painful ever... especially the scene with Emma and Snow, where Emma finally admits that she loves August.
And I really loved the bit where Emma reads Pinocchio's story to Henry and the parallels between them.