|Reviews for In Plain Sight|
| ForeverRobsessed chapter 35 . 14h ago
I got to know about this story at Twifanfictionrecs...
really enjoyed it! I think it had the right balance of romance and angst. Thnx!
| DeeFC chapter 34 . 3/14
Loved the ending! Thanks for writing such a wonderful story, I enjoyed it so much :)
(I won't go into the whole biology lesson of how Edward being a twin couldn't get Bella pregnant with twins lol)
| brown0520 chapter 1 . 3/13
Sweet story : )
| DeeFC chapter 25 . 3/13
I discovered this story on the Top Ten List for 2013, congratulations! I've been glued to it for the past two days and cannot put it down. I can't wait to see Irina's comeuppance, and Bella's surgery. Awesome story :)
| Sassyvampmama chapter 35 . 3/12
I absolutely loved this story! Thank you for sharing it.
| ama2978 chapter 34 . 3/11
Great story. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing.
| Vampfan1 chapter 34 . 3/8
Wow! Everything wrapped up in a neat little package. I just can't stress how much I have enjoyed your story. Also, I have to tell you that you without a doubt have the very best Edwards in your stories and this one was no exception. This story had it all. Love, sex, drama, mystery and an epi like I like that takes the reader out a ways and lets us know what happens in both the near and far future. I was glad to see you offed Irina. Wasn't sure how she was going to go away without it being a permanent thing. I thought you were actually very kind in letting her go quickly in an accident. I'm not sure I would have been as merciful. I mean she did try to off Bella. Anyway everything worked out in the end. Oh and also just wanted to say that my faith in you as an HEA writer let me know you were full of it when you left the chapter hanging with the operation not working. I knew you were delaying and that you would never let the story end that way. Edward was to perfect and dedicated to much of his life to that operation for it to not work. But I did get a nice laugh out of it. I told myself...she thinks she's being sneaky but I know better. LOL anyway, I am now at a loss. You see I have read all three of your stories in a row and have seriously loved them all. I'm not sure what to do now. There are no more. I guess I will have to look through my favorites list and see what's there. I did write down your Rec's that were given and I will hope they are as good as your stories. I will miss your work. Since you don't have anymore stories, I will leave you with this...I wish you a Dishie's Bella kind of life!
| tweetytweets chapter 35 . 3/8
It's a very good story.. Thanks for sharing..
| dana2928 chapter 34 . 3/8
Love Love Love!
| Vampfan1 chapter 16 . 3/7
Oh what the heck does Irina have planned? this has been relatively tame on the Bella Threat Level Meter, but something tells me that the needle might be going up in the near future. I have read your other two stories. I am looking forward to Bella getting her sight back. please say she will. I am not however looking forward to the blow up, angst ridden road I think they are about to go on to get there. Oh well I guess its got to be done. Onward with Docward!
| Vampfan1 chapter 8 . 3/6
ok, so this isn't a criticism its a nagging question I'm worried about within the story. Edward obviously loves Bella and has been watching her for some time. They are together now. However, I'm wondering if Bella is ever going to feel insecure in his love for her because, 1. He is a Dr. who fixes eyesight and she happens to be blind and 2. He just happens to have this new procedure he's invented and needs a test subject to try it out on to see if it works more than just in theory. Wondering if Bella will wrongly put 2 and 2 together and feel Edward targeted her because of her blindness and wooed her for that reason instead of for her as a person.
I hope not but hey this is FF and you enjoy your angst.
Another theme to the previous two stories...people targeting Bella because Edward picked her. Enter Irina .Dun Dun Dun! After hearing Edwards story I think I can assume she is a calculating, cold hearted bitch who thinks only of herself. If she is back trying to get Edward, Bella is going to seem like a pathetic, inferior person to Irina because she will think her blindness makes her less than perfect, undeserving of Edward and will feel like she is completely superior to Bella. Well she would probably think that anyway, but even more so because she is sight impaired. But Bella's blindness does make her an easier target if Irina chooses to try and hurt her. Do I detect some" bitch kibble" in the future? If so...Go Conrad! I just hate seeing mean people bully others especially if they are being mean to others because they have a disability/impairment. ( not sure what the current PC term is and do not mean to offend). People cannot help how they were born or if tragedy strikes. Anyway, soapbox. I'll move along. These are just thoughts I am randomly having. Not even sure if you are still reading reviews for these stories because they are a few years old. But in case you are, there you go. Until next time. :)
| tweetytweets chapter 18 . 3/6
It was a lovely chapter.. And thanks for clarifying Irina s intentions.. I've to hear to work now but can't keep the thing down.. I'm addicted:!
| Vampfan1 chapter 6 . 3/6
hey there it's me again. Reading your 3rd story. I can't seem to get enough of them. I'm reading all of yours straight through. Although I don't usually review every chapter, I'm not a lurker so here is your first review for this one. Problem is it's not really a review. You authors are so brave opening up your works to scrutiny, who am I really to say something is wrong. The only bad thing I ever bitch about is when the author clearly should have paid more attention in English class. Can't stand words and grammar used inappropriately. That's my thing. But clearly that is not an issue for you or you have awesome betas. Either way I don't see the mistakes. And honey your stories are anything but boring and that's the other thing I have issues with. I usually don't even bitch to bad about that either. I just quit reading and move on to a better story. So there you have it. I won't be slamming your work. I will be enjoying it as I have the 2 previous stories. This in and of itself may make my reviews boring. Sorry. Now I'm off to go find dinner and then get back to the next chappie!
| tweetytweets chapter 3 . 3/2
I think he is really sweet :)
| tweetytweets chapter 2 . 3/2
That's got to be the best way of asking for reviews