Reviews for Cinderella
BellaRose chapter 7 . 8/13/2013
I really loved this version of cinderella, It was a great idea!

The only suggestion I can make is be more aware of the wording you choose, For example, Unless your story is set in modern times words such as "Y'all" and "Hey" would not be used.

I hope you continue with the sequel! :)
Guest chapter 8 . 7/17/2013
MAKE IT, MAKE IT, MAKE ITTTT!
kwea8 chapter 8 . 6/15/2013
What is the title of the sequel going to be
rvanderzwaag17 chapter 8 . 4/14/2013
Loved the story! Would absolutely love to see a sequel based on the teaser you provided, looks good so far. Keep up the good work!
Cassia Goode chapter 8 . 1/13/2013
Yay! Sequel!
nightrader1234 chapter 7 . 12/21/2012
HMM so like were was the captin this whole time?
Guest chapter 7 . 11/29/2012
interesting combiantion of Oliver twist, and Aladdin.
writer of random fanfics chapter 7 . 11/27/2012
sequel?
Jyoti chapter 4 . 11/3/2012
Great job! :D
Jyoti chapter 3 . 11/3/2012
Amazing! I really like this idea.
Jyoti chapter 2 . 11/3/2012
Wonderful job. I love this!
Jyoti chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Wonderful job. I really like the plot to this, it's great!
pollA chapter 7 . 10/23/2012
LLLLOOOOVVVVEEE IIITTTT! Awsome story!
Tilly0006 chapter 7 . 10/21/2012
Beautiful story and so sweet. I love it!
CocoRocks chapter 7 . 10/21/2012
This was a interesting story to read. I loved it.
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