|Reviews for Breaking and Entering|
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
Cynthia... You Troll :3
| Reshie and Zekie chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Cynthia: Greatest troll ever! This story made my entire day. Only if Cynthia wasn't there, and someone else was, he could've got free junk like Max Repels or Cheri Berries! Haha, time to favorite this story. *Favorites while eating some Berries*
| Farla chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
It's not really breaking and entering if the door is open, you know.
And this is pretty meh. None of this is actually a joke or anything, it's just something dumb and you turning to the reader to say "hey, this is dumb, lol!" Anyone can do that.
You wouldn't capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn't capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you're using it as the pokemon's name, ie, Ash's pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it's a proper noun, which are the names or nicknames of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you're thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.
Dialogue is written as "Hello," she said or "Hello!" she said, never "Hello." She said or "Hello." she said or "Hello," She said or "Hello" she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn't contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. In that case it's written as "Hello." She grinned, never "Hello," she grinned or "Hello," She grinned or "Hello." she grinned. Note that something isn't a speech verb just because it's a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you're breaking up two complete sentences it's "Hi," she said. "This is it." not "Hi," she said, "this is it." or "Hi," she said "this is it." And if you're breaking up a sentence in the middle, it's "Hi. This," she said, "is it." The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don't use quotation marks with thoughts.
| SmileForever chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Oh gosh, I'm not sure what led me to this story in the first place but i couldn't stop smiling and laughing throughout the whole thing. Thank you for the good read. :)
| ArtemisisSymmetrical chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Well, remind me never t break into Cynthia's house. Kudos to Black for being my test subject XD
Great lil' one-shot, I love it!
| memesandbrokendreamslmaokai chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Cynthia as a troll was pure genius. Good job. Actually, I know nothing about Unova (cuz I heard that it's stupid), I just came here cuz Cynthia was in it. XD