|Reviews for Losing Humanity|
| MagMagdas chapter 32 . 12/13/2014
This is The best story I ever read about liara and Shepard! Beutiful!
Very good job! :)
| Yestare70 chapter 32 . 11/24/2014
Great job, lovely story. Much appreciated!
| Guest chapter 32 . 8/28/2014
| rakuzo chapter 32 . 8/25/2014
Thank you for a great ending. I'm waiting for the epilogue. Thank you.
| metaladdict chapter 32 . 8/25/2014
great ending man ill look forward to an epilogue
| LuckyF chapter 32 . 8/25/2014
As with all great stories I'm a bit sad to see it end, but it's a good ending. I'm not that good with words so I'll just say thank you for writing and sharing this story.
| Desert Sunrise chapter 32 . 8/25/2014
This is a great ending, and hope to actually see that Epilogue... maybe an Epilogue plus?
Thanks for the heart-rending tale, the joys, the sorrows, and the happy(?) ending!
| firesprite1123 chapter 31 . 7/15/2014
this chapter was well worth waiting for. sorry to hear about your hand, but I'm glad you're okay. can't wait to finish this story. it's been great from the start.
| Desert Sunrise chapter 31 . 7/14/2014
Have to admit, Tali's announcement did surprise me... I thought for sure when she got word from the fleet, it was going to be regarding the Geth. Little did I know... lol
I hope you actually keep Shepard alive and don't give us a last minute twist in the gut... med evac too slow... too damaged to recover from injuries... whatever. Knowing it was coming to the end, I actually sat down and did a speed-read of the first 20 chapters, then read normally from there to get back into the full mind-set for the story. Start to finish without the time gaps waiting for updates was actually very rewarding.
This was an awesome wrap-up, very well done, and I can't wait to read the 'rest of the story.'
| metaladdict chapter 31 . 7/13/2014
great chapter overall I would say but I am feeling how your delay in chapters is hurting your overall story since i can barely remember what happened last chapter.
| Planetar chapter 31 . 7/13/2014
I know I haven't commented as much on this as I probably should. Guess I've taken it for granted, since you get all my feedback first-hand anyway. So, for that I'm sorry.
Ever since I've started helping you, I've been amazed by the story you write and the characterization of characters. Well, I've been amazed by it even before that, but since then, I've had a little insight on how you work, how you write and a little of your thought process. It's been a great experience and I dare say I've learned a lot. So thank you, for an opportunity to help. I daresay and hope that it's been beneficial for both of us. Also, give yourself some credits, you've been nothing but super patient with me as well.
Shepard is of course the most interesting character to watch. Now, as much as I love paragon and hero-like Shepards, yours has been much closer to the anti-hero and as such, very interesting to watch. The inner struggles, the fight to remain good person, while knowing she's loosing more of herself as the war goes on... really enjoyable and dark. And Liara being there to pull Shepard back from the total darkness... I think you've really managed to catch her personality and unique voice perfectly. It's a rocky relationship, but damn if it wasn't a pleasure to read.
These last few chapters have been an emotional roller-coaster. You've managed to capture the bleakness of the situation perfectly, but you've also shown there is a ray of hope, no matter how small. Now that I think about it, maybe that was the purpose of the beam in London? Or maybe I'm just over-thinking it... In any case, it was a wild ride and very tense to watch. Can't wait to see how you end it.
And in the end, let me just say thank you for a follow and favourite. It means a lot :)
| rakuzo chapter 31 . 7/13/2014
Yes, Shepard is alive! Thank you for update.
| Yestare70 chapter 30 . 4/21/2014
Lovely chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Shep saying goodbye was tearful! Good job!
| firesprite1123 chapter 30 . 4/15/2014
first off just wanna say thanks for writing. i really enjoyed your story and this chapter was great. i can't wait to see if shepard survives or not. either way your version of the final events was awesome.
| metaladdict chapter 30 . 4/12/2014
hmm very interesting. Common Shepard deserves to life after all of that shit she went through.
great chapter overall.