|Reviews for The Forgotten Princess|
| may chapter 7 . 5/28/2013
I would like to say i do enjoy reading ur story for the story line but there are a few things i would like to comment on. 1st would be that this is a narrative story which means it tells a story, so when readers read ur story they are meant to feel the emotion the character is feeling, therefore more description of characters feelings. Also there is hardly any ana pov in the story so far. would like to see how ana interacts with the child also wat she thinks abt the situation. Also would like to see the little girls pov n wat she thinks about christian. 1 last thing , the law and red tape surrounding the situation/adoption is a bit too detailed but i do understand that you trying to be realistic, could summarize it a bit. There are large number of people involved in the situation i understand in reality thats wat it is like tho its hard to keep up but i do feel like you have a bigger plan. Im not in any way bashing your story. would still carry on reading it. :)
| skinsavant chapter 7 . 5/28/2013
ana suffers from depression. it's going to be tough to get her to cooperate. otherwise, she would have more compassion towards the motherless little girl. she should consider the fact that christian lost his mother at a very young age and lucky for him, he was adopted by carrick and grace. this poor little girl still had another parent, her biological father, who wants her. i wish ana would just snap out of it and go back to being the ana that christian fell in love and still loves.
i wonder who told the press?
| zo threp chapter 7 . 5/27/2013
I really like this story so far but I wish your Ana had put up more of a fight when Teddy was removed from her car and when Christian dictated all of the terms for her to visit Ray. Hope you update soon.
| tushka chapter 7 . 5/26/2013
I am really enjoying your story but please update alittle more often - I had to go back and read the first chapters again (not that it wasn't enjoyable!) thanks for the entertainment!
| yunderwood chapter 7 . 5/26/2013
welcome back and congrats
| mojojojo152 chapter 7 . 5/26/2013
wow weird cant wait for more xx
| jtracey chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
| Fangirl44 chapter 6 . 4/4/2013
Very interested to hear what this little girls name is.
| dancemom33 chapter 6 . 3/30/2013
What about Ana
| SamiWaite chapter 6 . 3/29/2013
Loving this story so far and can't wait for the nxt update hope ana comes bak and able to help instead of running off or make it worse and the little one passed from pillar to post in the care system... until nxt update sami xx
| Foggynights chapter 2 . 3/27/2013
| yunderwood chapter 6 . 3/27/2013
finally all the legal crap out of the way, now you my dear congrats on your wedding day. don t stay gone to long we love your writing. enjoy and be blessed.
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/27/2013
This chapter was great I'm glad Chris got visatation.
| And1rea chapter 6 . 3/27/2013
Congrats on your upcoming wedding! Have a blast that day & remember to eat a piece of your cake! :)
I am glad that CG was awarded the visitation! I knew it would happen! I really hope that Ana comes back soon! Or at least we are able to see them communicating with each other while she is away. It just makes me uneasy. I am sure you understand considering we don't know the outcome of the story.
Good luck with finding a beta too! I know Ordlas likes to Beta other author's stories, maybe you could contact her.
| romance4me2 chapter 6 . 3/27/2013
Awesome court day for Christian!
Congratulations on your wedding!