Reviews for Trip to Egypt
Snowman chapter 13 . 3/25/2014
HOLY CRAP! MY IN-GANE THEREY WAS RITE! *for the most part...*
nat157s chapter 14 . 10/18/2013
Long time no see or speak Molly! Wow I saw this update and I was like OMG! :D...I literally jumped for joy.

I completely understand what you're saying about being late with updating because you've lost interest and the flow has died...I totally understand that, I have myself have had that myself thats why I haven't updated sooner and gone of the planet as well...I know shame on me hehe :O... Anyways!

Another amazing, story under your belt. Everytime you write you grow with your talent and your writing gets better each time!

Another amazing ending to finish the story, you may say otherwise, but it was so heartwarming and lovely to see Mal and Amy share that moment together! I have said this once and am probably gonna say this a thousand times!

But you're truly amazing and talented author! It is always a breathe of fresh air and a joy/pleasure to read such amazing work!

So fantastic job Hun and I miss you! Been a while! Hope you're doing okay and can't wait to see what other stories are next to follow in the footsteps to go with you greatest and endless amount of brilliant stories!

Once again utterly amazing!

-Nat! :) xxx
Annie chapter 14 . 8/6/2013
Aww I loved this end and I really enjoyed reading this and all your other stories. I can't wait to see what stories you are planning. Seriously I love your writing and it was what made me give my opinion for the first time as before I never reviewed :)
My Quiet Riot chapter 14 . 8/5/2013
That was a beautiful conclusion to the story, Molly! I loved it! Oh, and yes, my allusion to this story in "Please Don't" was mostly-intentional. (: I wrote it out, and then I was like, "Hey! That's the name of Molly's story! Now I gotta keep it." Anyways, fab job as always!

— Kimberly
HopelessRomantic1994 chapter 14 . 8/5/2013
Great ending Molly! The part where Amy was talking about Ken *sobs* bless her. Looking forward to your future stories! :D
-Jade xx
The Beautiful Filth chapter 14 . 8/5/2013
Aww this is the end! D: and ahahaha I love the tripping over the jaw comment, as well as Nat telling Mal not to even think about pushing her in haha. And heck yes they're going to be fine!

aww Molly I hope everything else in life goes well for you! :)

-Christie x
The Beautiful Filth chapter 12 . 8/5/2013
THEY'RE ENGAGED! :D I'm so glad for them! I love how you contrast this proposal with the one for Sandra haha
The Beautiful Filth chapter 9 . 8/5/2013
Love this chapter, especially when you describe Amy's pain :O
MinxBunni22 chapter 14 . 8/4/2013
Yay! I am glad you finally got around to finishing this story and the ending is not bad at all! I really hope you get back to writing and write some more amazing stories!
AKgal2001 chapter 13 . 3/15/2013
Omgomgomg I LOVE this chapter! To be honest I totally forgot they were engaged! So that was surprise! I also adore the part towards the end with Mal and Nat. Adorable! Update soon!
Things in Ink chapter 13 . 3/14/2013

I didn't read this story sooner because I thought it would be just like Capital Holiday, but I read it all last night and WOW I just love it!

Amy is so great in this! A lot of people tend to forget/not show the effects of Ken dying, and I really like that you did. Everyone's really great in this story, actually, and I found myself laughing a bit too loud for an eleven PM fanfiction reading.


I had tears in my eyes after reading the whole story. It's just so sad and amazing and sweet and I just love it!

I like it just as much as Capital Holiday, if not better!

nat157s chapter 13 . 3/12/2013
Hey Molly,

Don't worry about not updating frequently I think me and most of the readers understand, plus when you do update it's make it 1000% bettwr to read because you never fail to amaze me with your amazingly written chapters!.

I gotta say I love this story so much, with every little detail you put in make this story a work of art.

Your so talented and you know how to make a story so great by the way you keep the reader engaged wanting more.

Everytime I see an update to this am super excited to read it because I just can't help but to smile, at this heart warming piece of heaven.

As always you live up to your name I gave you the Queen Of Maltara fluffiness! Adorable how you describe Mal and Natara love for one another. Incredible :')

Can't wait for an update. But no rush I know it will be worth the wait.

Miss ya hun and hope your okay soon you know where I am if you ever need me, am inbox away. Good luck for your exams and everything hun!

-Your "Big Sis Nat" LYLAS :') xx
Annie chapter 13 . 3/8/2013
Haha I loved that chapter it was so sweet and funny. Honestly you make your chapters sound really bad by saying you don't like them and I read them and they are still amazing! Good luck for your results I know how you feel because I'm feeling the same way :)
BreezyFan chapter 13 . 3/7/2013
Welp, you got that boat, right? Sail over here and you can give me that hug! ;) that way I can immediately give you your cookies as well :') you're the best, Molly!

I mean... Like... I can't even describe what your chapter has done to me. It was so Maldorable and funny :D You're the queen for a reason!
But I Have Promises To Keep chapter 13 . 3/6/2013
It was so cute and I loved it! And take your time with updating, it's worth the wait! I know how to feels to be drowning in stress from everything, and I really hope things go better for you soon 3
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