Reviews for Nothing in Return
Drjeesh chapter 16 . 7/13/2016
This chapter was brilliant, I hope to see more of this in the future. I want to know how that festival goes
Drjeesh chapter 9 . 7/2/2016
Pretty good
Server lock chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
Its nicely laying out the foundation for the story.
GiantMako chapter 17 . 6/10/2015
Great story Max!
I still remember the first time I accidentally stumbled upon the original version of this story and how it had me hooked upon your stories within two chapters.

It's been a real treat to see your writing improve, as well as your archive of deep interesting stories, that just get better and better.

Be prepared to hear more from me in time dude.
Chi-Cop1 chapter 17 . 12/16/2014
Well done good story, again! :)
nightmaster000 chapter 16 . 11/28/2014
Great ending to a awesome story. I really enjoyed reading this story.
SS Killroze chapter 17 . 11/21/2014
This story was wonderful ! beautiful conclusion and lovely epilogue ! I am so glad I stuck with this story all this long haha because that was definitely worth it ! :)

You are a true artist of words lol

If that makes sense lol
Potato man chapter 17 . 11/20/2014
Good job writing the story man, it was a fun ride with feeling. Looking forward to future works!
Guest chapter 17 . 11/20/2014
I hope you make another story like this real soon.
Chi-Cop1 chapter 15 . 10/6/2014
Not bad at all. Nice story.
SS Killroze chapter 15 . 9/25/2014
WOOOOOO HOOOOOO I LOVE THIS STORY AND I LOVE THAT ENDING! gosh you sir are such an inspiration for me to write myself! This is just wonderful and everything is just impeccable and I am a fanboy to your fanfics... Now... All I need is for you to have Blaze to kiss sonic in that Need to Want fic and I'll be truly happy XDD lmao
Guest chapter 15 . 9/24/2014
love the story but are you really going to give this a bad ending come on man really? other than that this has been an awesome story and worth the wait. and one more thing is it possible for u to repost the original 2 storys back up? now those storys i completely loved and was kind of steamed when you took them down i was planning to make a animation of that story with your permission of course thanks for makeing a great story and for reading this
NintendoSegaandallgamefan on
nightmaster000 chapter 15 . 9/23/2014
Awesome chapter. Good to see Buns found a place to belong. Also good to see the Suppression Squad put in their place.

I really loved the ending where Buns kissed Sonic.

Can't wait to read the epilogue.
nightmaster000 chapter 13 . 6/6/2014
Great chapter.

Look's like there's trouble ahead for Buns. Is she up to the challenge?

Shame to hear that next chapter might be the end of the story. I've really been enjoying it.
Fan of Nirvana 2015 chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
I'm bored as hell myself...
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