|Reviews for Nothing in Return|
| Server lock chapter 1 . 8/8
Its nicely laying out the foundation for the story.
| GiantMako chapter 17 . 6/10
Great story Max!
I still remember the first time I accidentally stumbled upon the original version of this story and how it had me hooked upon your stories within two chapters.
It's been a real treat to see your writing improve, as well as your archive of deep interesting stories, that just get better and better.
Be prepared to hear more from me in time dude.
| Chi-Cop1 chapter 17 . 12/16/2014
Well done good story, again! :)
| nightmaster000 chapter 16 . 11/28/2014
Great ending to a awesome story. I really enjoyed reading this story.
| SS Killroze chapter 17 . 11/21/2014
This story was wonderful ! beautiful conclusion and lovely epilogue ! I am so glad I stuck with this story all this long haha because that was definitely worth it ! :)
You are a true artist of words lol
If that makes sense lol
| Potato man chapter 17 . 11/20/2014
Good job writing the story man, it was a fun ride with feeling. Looking forward to future works!
| Guest chapter 17 . 11/20/2014
I hope you make another story like this real soon.
| Chi-Cop1 chapter 15 . 10/6/2014
Not bad at all. Nice story.
| SS Killroze chapter 15 . 9/25/2014
WOOOOOO HOOOOOO I LOVE THIS STORY AND I LOVE THAT ENDING! gosh you sir are such an inspiration for me to write myself! This is just wonderful and everything is just impeccable and I am a fanboy to your fanfics... Now... All I need is for you to have Blaze to kiss sonic in that Need to Want fic and I'll be truly happy XDD lmao
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/24/2014
love the story but are you really going to give this a bad ending come on man really? other than that this has been an awesome story and worth the wait. and one more thing is it possible for u to repost the original 2 storys back up? now those storys i completely loved and was kind of steamed when you took them down i was planning to make a animation of that story with your permission of course thanks for makeing a great story and for reading this
| nightmaster000 chapter 15 . 9/23/2014
Awesome chapter. Good to see Buns found a place to belong. Also good to see the Suppression Squad put in their place.
I really loved the ending where Buns kissed Sonic.
Can't wait to read the epilogue.
| nightmaster000 chapter 13 . 6/6/2014
Look's like there's trouble ahead for Buns. Is she up to the challenge?
Shame to hear that next chapter might be the end of the story. I've really been enjoying it.
| Fan of Nirvana 2015 chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
I'm bored as hell myself...
| geo hikari the 2nd chapter 13 . 5/24/2014
What are you talking about the ss was behind those kidnappings and maybe the info release as well. With antisally being there while the ff were out she could have given the council permission to release the info. I think they arrived during the mission and quickly took the oppertunity to wreak buns' new life. So don't try to fool me. Who out of the ss was not with the freedom fighters during the mission. I know sonic, sally, roster, tails, Amy, bunny, and Antoine were there but remember the ss has three other members that have counterparts in the freedom fighters. Dulcy, Nicole, and a certain duck doctor. Well Nicole might be a streach so replace her with a certain cream rabbit. If there are anti's of the freedom fighters than what's stopping anti's of the rest of Sonic's friends from joining. They could have been picked up by miles. So sorry if I don't think your convincing there.
| Chi-Cop1 chapter 12 . 4/21/2014
Lot coming to a head here, keep going!