Reviews for Breakeven
Emily chapter 2 . 1/7/2014
"The coffee smelt" - should be smelled because a smelt is a fish.

Please fix the typos and grammatical errors.
Emily chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Star City is in another country or another state? There is a difference.
Melanie chapter 9 . 11/18/2012
great story
Rachet chapter 9 . 11/17/2012
Loved this fic. It was so sweet.
Sunfiresarah chapter 8 . 11/16/2012
Nice update
GalanthaDreams chapter 8 . 11/16/2012
I am ridiculously excited for what happens next and, just yes, I love Oliver but he definitely has his immature quirks when he's running away from something. The way you confronted his behavior and Julia's intervention was absolutely lovely.
Madlenita chapter 8 . 11/15/2012
Oh, so ollie is going to Metropolis and want fight for Chloe ;-)
Thanks for this chapter, and that Julia will be in Metropolis too...
Rachet chapter 8 . 11/15/2012
Julia rocks. Ty
Kreuse chapter 7 . 11/13/2012
Oohh, Lois on a mission, this is going to be fun!
Sunfiresarah chapter 7 . 11/13/2012
I'm a little sad there was no Ollie in this chapter but it was still a nice update. Looking forward to the next one.
Rachet chapter 7 . 11/13/2012
Chloe no. Jimmy is so much bad just waiting to happen.
Madlenita chapter 7 . 11/13/2012
Thanks for this chapter, i can't wait for next one, will be there Oliver? Thanks again...
chlolo1213 chapter 7 . 11/12/2012
Awe denial is evil its messing with chlollie
Booklover9477 chapter 6 . 11/11/2012
Awesome chapter! Awww that was such a emotional filledsad moment, with her confessing not wanting to be a second choice any longer. Ugh I wished he followed her, now he will be put back way behind on the getting back together with her font. Keep up the great work! can't wait to read more! Until next time, Laila :k
Booklover9477 chapter 5 . 11/11/2012
Awesome chapter! Hmmm I don't think this is the last of ivy. I love the dress choice, kudos for the color. Oooh yay they're gonna ditch. Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read more! Until next time, Laila :k
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