Reviews for Demonic Warrior - Human Heart
Jonathan6850 chapter 7 . 5/27/2014
This story just gets better and better. Keep up the good work.
Jonathan6850 chapter 5 . 5/26/2014
When Naruto gets pissed, you'd better run for cover. Nobody messes with Hinata and gets away with it.
Jonathan6850 chapter 4 . 5/25/2014
There are missing words here are there, but the story's still good.
Jonathan6850 chapter 3 . 5/25/2014
Naruto puts everyone to shame and takes no prisoners. It'll be even more interesting when he meets his equal or superior.
Jonathan6850 chapter 2 . 5/25/2014
I think you went a little overboard with the necklace description. A sentence with alot of commas needs to broken down and continued in the next sentence. Other than that, I really liked the omakes.
Jonathan6850 chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
Very nice start to great story.
MythicGR66 chapter 7 . 7/8/2013
The story moves at a very rushed pace, you wrote a story, that should of been done over 20-30 chapters but was done in 7, there is so much plot advancement it's like reading a summary of the lord of the rings trilogy.

There is not enough detail, please continue writing but slow the pace down a bit, add more detail and fill the story out more.

You made the resurface of Naruto, the defense of Sauna/Oni, what happened to Naruto and his time in 'Hell', the birth of a new village, the Kiri civil war and the Naruto convincing Itachi and Kisame to join his Village, in one chapter, all of that should of been spread over around 7-8 chapters at around the same size of this chapter, for each.
Dracoessa chapter 5 . 6/22/2013
Oh kami, this wouldn't turn out good.
Dracoessa chapter 4 . 6/22/2013
Damn konoha, you really fucking screwed yourself now.
Phoenix185 chapter 7 . 5/4/2013
i love it!
ss chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
man this is so bad XD it pain me read more!
Hee-Ho Master chapter 7 . 4/30/2013
Well looks like Kumo will have some company in being wiped out soon keep up the good work till next time,

Hee Ho!
ZyiareHellsing chapter 7 . 4/29/2013
Oh it's going down!
someone chapter 7 . 4/29/2013
oh bitch he gonna die
Silvermane1 chapter 7 . 4/29/2013
cool
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