Reviews for The Lost Girl of Duane Street
avalondutch chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Wow you write so beautifully. I felt my breath quickening as the story progressed. Maybe it wasn't such a good idea to read this when it's going to get dark soon and my house has no power because of the hurricane. Well I guess I'll be sleeping with my flashlight to my chest tonight. It was worth it though :)
Acorn chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
I so did not see that coming! Well played my frien, well
Verreax chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
What happpened to him?
I was so scared!
illegiblescrawl chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
This is so freaky. Poor Tumbler!
You sure do know how to spin a tale!
I'm gonna be having nightmares tonight...*shudders* I could have sworn, as soon as finished this, I heard this little girly laugh behind me...
Great writing, great plot, love the suspense.
Happy halloween!
-Scrawl
shinigami nanoda chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
I loved this! It was delightfully spooky! I really loved how you built the suspense; it was perfect.
Pegasus M chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Ugh, Stress, I 3 you. Let me get my fangirling out of the way first: Yay, Skittery! Yay, Skittery -and- Jack! I love so, so much how you write them, individually and together. (I love how you write all of the characters, really.)

This was so good. I found myself skipping ahead a few lines before going back - you know how sometimes you just have to know what happens, or you get so nervous that you have to know if it's safe to read the parts you skipped? No? Am I the only one who does this?

Oh man, that ending. Nope. :( But still, so amazingly written.
Ealasaid Una chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
that's the end? what happen to Tumbler? why didn't Jack help tumbler before? what is going on?
anonymous chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
I really loved this!