|Reviews for Yakitate! Japan-Oneshots!|
| Bite The Dust chapter 65 . 2/22
Hello I have returned after my leave of absence! I was finally able to get your valentines present up last night, check it out as soon as you can.
This chapter was great but the arc seems kind of... Unfinished. I wanted to see Meister and Kuroyan exchange presents, and there wasn't any mention of what Monica got for Suwa, either...
| Bite The Dust chapter 64 . 2/9
Oh boy, Suwa's being very... Suwa, and everyone else is so confused... Poor babies.
| Bite The Dust chapter 63 . 2/3
Lots of Valentines gift confusion will be happening soon, I fear... I bet Kuroyan, Meister, and Suwa would all be difficult to shop for... Monica would be fine with just candy but I think she'd appreciate something different that would last a long time, since she eats tons of it every day anyway.
I need to write something for Valentines, too...
| Bite The Dust chapter 62 . 2/2
Oh, I'm so glad you're back! I've missed you and your lovely fics so! I kept trying to write, myself, during your absence, but nothing would come to me... I'm sorry ;_;
(There's just an itty bitty mistake in here, by the way, Meister asks "Are you free" and Kuroyan replies "I do" when it should be "I am". Nothing huge, but it breaks the flow of things a little bit.)
| Bite The Dust chapter 61 . 12/1/2013
Oh yay! It's finally done. Poor Suwa, he was so close...
| psycl chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
["Azuma, it's 'Afro brothers,' isn't it?" Azuma nodded as he kneaded the dough.]- the best! xD
| Bite The Dust chapter 60 . 5/7/2013
Ha! I was wondering when you were going to remember to end this arc! xD
| Bite The Dust chapter 58 . 4/13/2013
... Reclining? I think receding is the word you're looking for... xD "Reclining hairline" creates the weird mental image of someone with an EZ-boy on their head...
| Bite The Dust chapter 57 . 3/10/2013
I hate those kinds of games! I always end up getting the bad end, no matter what! As a matter of fact, in most games with multiple endings, I get the bad one if I don't use a walkthrough. I don't know if I can't get obvious clues or what...
| Bite The Dust chapter 56 . 2/4/2013
Oh, no. Poor everybody. I wonder why Pantasia hasn't hired a company psychologist yet. Lord knows every single one of their employees needs time with a shrink...
| Bite The Dust chapter 54 . 1/26/2013
| Bite The Dust chapter 52 . 1/8/2013
Hmmm... Now that I look at it closely, your writing does seem kind of stiff. Especially that second to last paragraph... Don't get me wrong, you've got a lot of talent, but I think you really should practice that "writing a story like you're telling it to someone out loud" thing. It would make everything sound so much more professional.
| Bite The Dust chapter 49 . 1/7/2013
This pairing is so strange! I guess that's why I find it so endearing.
| Bite The Dust chapter 48 . 1/4/2013
The loquat omake came out way before Monica was introduced, unfortunately ;_; It would have been really cool if she was in it. Or in more of the actual story, even... She's in it so little even though she's so much more useful than all the other girls!
| Bite The Dust chapter 47 . 1/3/2013
Hmph! Ungrateful twerps! If only they understood we're the only two people keeping the fandom alive ;_;