Reviews for Moving Into Your Arms
BlueChappy chapter 10 . 10/25/2016
I Love Mina and Mamoru so damn much. this story is cute and happy. thanks
autobotlover chapter 10 . 12/7/2014
Lovely fic. Crossing traffic was great, hah.
DisneyFanGirl27 chapter 10 . 8/14/2014
This chapter actually made me cry!
DisneyFanGirl27 chapter 6 . 8/14/2014
awwww this chapter was actually sweet. Can't believe I'm reading a Mamuro and Mina story though but it has Usa and Rei so it's not that odd :)
I am the Queen of Fire chapter 10 . 12/25/2013
So so cute!
xxkaylakittyxo chapter 10 . 8/20/2013
I liked this! It made me laugh a whole bunch! :)
guest25 chapter 4 . 7/29/2013
I like seeing Usagi playing matchmaker to Minako and Mamoru, instead of Motoki playing matchmaker to Usagi and Mamoru.
DjinniFires chapter 2 . 1/29/2013
Hello from WA. I chose this chapter because it didn't have a review yet.

These lines struck me as particularly good: "No I can't let you go Rei. I'm your burden remember? You're staying with me for an eternity." And also "But I like it when you weigh me down." You use burden/weight in both the abstract and the physical-nice.

My main suggestion is to pick a point-of-view and stick with it. Since this is almost completely dialogue and most of the description could be considered objective POV, so it's not too jarring, but... "Usagi decided..." would have to be her POV while Rei's "There was no way she could resist..." would be her POV while "Rei's face turned a light shade of red" would be Usagi's again.

At the beginning, the back-and-forth could have a couple less repetitions.
SailorVfan chapter 10 . 1/1/2013
Hi! I would like to tell that at first I decided to choose this story to read was only because I've seen the couple that you prescribed as "Minako and Mamoru".
For me, I'd love to read all men who pair with Minako and Mamoru is rarely to find to read. Although girls love is not my reading type, but I can read your "Usagi and Rei" as happy as I've ever felt to read this type.

About the story, for my opinion, this story such an elaborately story that show the author was paid attention to write very much! I'm really appreciate your fantasy-romantic plot! If you have a chance, please no hesitate to write the pair of Mina and Mamoru again! I'm impressive as "reader" and impressive as "Minoko-fanclub"! I've read all chapters of this story once in the time during free-time of working days as today and it make me full of better, relax and happy emotional!
Another that, your word's choose method made me know a lot vocabulary!

Thanks for new words! (for me.)
Thanks for great story! _
Serena-Darien2001 chapter 10 . 12/9/2012
Cool story. :D
Vchanny chapter 10 . 12/3/2012
I think the title is fine as is. No need to change. Thanks for explaining the Chibiusa aspect! I was curious.
Hamfast Gamgee chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Good tale so far, you write well. I will confess that I don't know anything about this fandom but this story is good. It looks vaguely Eastern at first sight. I don't think that alternating between Minako and Mina should be a problem. I read Tolkien and more than a few of his characters have more names than just two. A shame about those two companions of hers that died. I admit that I don't know how they did or anything so perhaps a bit of a flashback on how they did would be nice, though perhaps those that know the fandom know! Or maybe you say so later. Your spelling and grammer seems fine, possibly a bit more description in one or two places would be nice. Still, interesting concept, I will read some more.
Lady Frozen Rose chapter 10 . 12/2/2012
I loved it. I loved Usagi and Rei being together, Mamoru and Minako getting together thanks to Rei and Usagi and from that, Minako becoming Chibiusa's mother. :) this was just absolutely amazing :) thank you for a great story
Guest chapter 10 . 12/1/2012
great story! Really like the mamoru/minako pairing.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/30/2012
gets better and better
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