|Reviews for Stamina-Soup|
| The Legend of Derpy chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Nice little drabble; it is nice to see the knights of Skyloft portrayed in a light other than "teenage swordsmen in training". There's not much to go by in the game personality wise, so I loved how you explained their pajamas. It made them feel a lot more human. The only problem I have is that you seem to have chopped off a section of your story on accident:
"Link was probably just la"
All in all, though, good job.
| omnimagery chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
That was a cute story! If that's what you intended anyway. You definitely could've made this a bit longer, partially explaining and displaying some of the relationships that took place in the game (How Cawlin fell in love with Karane, Strich's bug infatuation, expanded upon Link and Fledge's friendship, and even some Zelink action with a jealous Groose, hehe.)
But perhaps that's asking for too much... meh.
I still loved the story though! Keep up the good work!
| Charles Winkles III chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
This works well.
However, the boulder being Groose part you should maybe put it in the same sentence of paragraph even.
One sentence is half gone, you should fix.
Other than that thanks bro, that was an enjoyable read.
Pipit would look fabulous if he wore a night gown.