|Reviews for Annie Get Your Gun|
| Blood Zephyr chapter 30 . 4/15
Wow. Is everyone is this fic an idiot?
| elljayde chapter 71 . 4/3
Amazing story last chapter made me cry. Would be nice to do an outtake story maybe from Daryl or Rick's Point of View after the loss of Annie.
| Eemmah chapter 71 . 3/20
I'm a mess. I'm a fucking mess. I read the whole fucking thing in a day and I'm cried and sorta not really laughed but fuck fuck. You got me and you got me good. I love you. Have a good life.
| BadWolf7673 chapter 71 . 3/15
Oh my stars! I loved every bit of this story, and I was so sad to find out that it was over. I thought maybe you were just taking a break and would start it up again, but alas, that was not the case.
Regardless, I adored your story. I thoroughly enjoyed it and Annie has definitely grown on me :) You managed to write all the other characters perfectly, while adding in your own and making it seem like she totally belonged there, which not a lot of people can do.
So far, your take on TWD has been my favourite, and I'm sad to see that it won't be continued. But again, I had fun reading what you wrote and I'm glad I found your story :) Keep up the fantastic work!
| Guest chapter 46 . 1/27
I loved this story in the beginning but once I got to this chapter I just couldn't read anymore. While I think you have a lot of talent I just don't like this story anymore. I really am sorry! :(
| Guest chapter 43 . 12/14/2016
riley is a fantastic character
| BrySt1 chapter 71 . 8/12/2016
THIS HURT MY SOUL BUT IT'S SO GOOD LIKE I JUST CAN'T
I'm glad Annie's happy
I just have to say I love Death! I don't know he was a great character and I freaked out every time he was around like I just can't, he was great. I would read some parts to my Mom and we would fangirl together so thank you for this beautiful piece of art!
| Nachtwens chapter 29 . 3/4/2016
I like the scene. She was already in love with him, that was clear. But I would really like to know about his feelings and thoughts on this. I think if you switched from the first person narrative and included others, (maybe starting when all of them arrived) it would have been easier creating tension between them. Right now, I am missing that angsty feeling beforehand and the passion during... I tend to really feel along with characters (more so when reading then when watching) and now I'm not feeling it. Not sure I'm explaining this right, but I don't know how to put this in a more constructice type of critique.
| Nachtwens chapter 27 . 3/4/2016
I get that daryl is postponing. It'll make it more difficult to leave after all. And there is a lot of stalling right now, time for action. Just having everyone sitting around and them dancing around each other like that, takes a long time. Don't get me wrong, this is good, but more stuff needs to happen in between. Maybe with other characters...
| Nachtwens chapter 21 . 3/3/2016
The man had got plans :p
| Nachtwens chapter 14 . 3/3/2016
He was with carol? Why? And how? I know she had a thing for him in the series, but he didn't reciprocate. I think I read somewhere that Norman said about daryl: he'll fuck a girl, but he won't stay to cuddle and if he ends up liking a girl, he'll be as uncomfortable about it as possible... Or something like that...
| Nachtwens chapter 13 . 3/3/2016
Akward as it should be with daryl. But still, who is this girlfriend?
| Nachtwens chapter 9 . 3/3/2016
Daryl's supposed girlfriend is Andrea?
| Nachtwens chapter 3 . 3/3/2016
I like her, she's tough!
| Nachtwens chapter 2 . 3/3/2016
I guess, since she really has been alone all this time, even some biker seems ok enough to let in. And he is alone, that helps. Still, I don't think I would be that trusting...