Reviews for The First Night Proposal
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2017
Please expand this story it really is beautiful and has potential to be a wonderful multi chapter story please just consider it
jessmarkbrOMGtheydid chapter 1 . 7/18/2017
Como não vi sua fic antes? Ela é maravilhosa! principalmente ele agarrando a cintura dela no final. Oh adoraria se você quisesse continuar essa maravilha!
Wow que bom que li essa fic antes da outra que pretendia ler, Ramy não é pra mim!
Bom adorei achar sua fic!
Espero ler muitas outras dessas suas maravilhas !
Parabéns pela ótima escrita
Sherie277 chapter 1 . 5/19/2016
Hi! Great story! Wished you had expanded or created a sequel to this! i am strongly intrigued to see what happens next! :) Hope one day soon you decide to continue this story! Thanks for creating such a fun and interesting story! :)
Stephen-Hawking chapter 1 . 9/25/2015
Nice story, but I want my Shamy smut :-(
shamour chapter 1 . 5/6/2015
Hi, I just found your story, it's so cute, I love it! Bacon compliments, eye coitus, hyperventilating, so much fun to read!:-)
Lilly Rae chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
really great! :)
famousindafuture chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
Ugh I think I may be in love with you as a person. Seriously. This. This is once again a slam dunk perfection basket. I love it so much. Once again, I wish it weren't a one shot. I think this would lead to sexy times- which I greatly would like to read. Also the dynamic of teacher/student is verrrryyy verrryyy appealing to me. Aww I love how they connected as well, and were so honest about what base they went to. Love.
AnitaRez chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
As soon as I read Megami grabbing her red hat I wondered if she was the person in 'Star-Crossed'. I love that story!

This one is great too! I love that they're meeting in college!
whitealmond chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Lol! Sheldon snatched her away like he did with Stuart XD I really liked this university AU - it was a lot of fun and the dialogue was perfect. I also noticed your red hat girl here - is she from an anime?
ARTmeg chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
I do love how it got intimate without it turning into sex, as I personally do not read sex stories, but at the same time absolutely adore the steamy scenes such as you had in this story. Alas those kinds of stories are hard to find.
Bravo, amazing story!
AudreyJeanne312 chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
You should definitely make a sequel to this like, TWO DAYS LATER , and make it rated M
Maynard chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
I only got about halfway through this. It's obvious you're not very familiar with the show. Amy isn't a college student, sweetie, and she was never meant to be with Raj.
Emily chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
That was sooooo adorable! I am a super picky fan fiction reader, I hate all pairings opposing mine and I hate OCs! But everything in this was written so well and was so cute! Love it!
moyrani chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Very interesting and kinda hot. Gotta love all the Star Crossed references! I think that Megami needs her own story. ;)
Lionne6 chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
"It was as if he was trying to get her pregnant with his eyes..."


Love all of the references - that was fun.
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